Wow, this story must have taken a lot of work. It seems very interesting so far. I'd better keep reading!

I really liked your story about these two superheroes. I really like your writing style- it kept me engaged even when there was hardly any Marcoburst-Stratogale action going on. Speaking of that, is this going to be a slow-burn kind of story? 'Cos there really isn't much advancement of the main romance, after eight chapters. The sidestories are uniformly entertaining and interesting, but I do wish that you would get the main romance going a little.

Still, I enjoyed every bit of it. Knowing that most of the characters will have snuffed it by the movie only adds an additional layer to the story. Do continue writing.

I really like this story, but I wish there was more about Mack and Enid. After all, the story is about them, right?

please go on i love tis story.

:(- You broke your promise? What a pity? I've been reading the chapters at my leisure, once in a while today, and you broke your promise? Well, that's sad. Back to the story- it just gets better and better.

I didn't have to wait, luckily, but it is a bit mean of you-

but I digress since Real Life is high priority, being real and all.

Good chapter. I can't believe the next one is the latest one so far!

I love that song "This is Halloween". I was just singing it today, earlier. Isn't that funny? This chapter was pretty eventful, and I enjoyed it- this is one of the best ones yet.

Wow, this is getting more and more exciting!

Well then, it's still very good and I'm still enjoying it. It's very original.

This is an awesome story! I'm glad I found it! It inspires me to check out those supers again!

With only a tiny bit of data from the files- which I enjoyed- you really are making it work spectacularly!

It's very nice, quite well-written, and engaging. Can't hardly wait for the rest of it. Going back on my watchlist. Please don't keep us all waiting, k?

I'm so sorry, I thought you had dropped off the face of the earth! Nice to have you back! Anyway, I don't really have time to give a decent review now, but I will. You can bank on that!

Yay you updated! I love this chapter, they are so few Glory Day fics focusing on the supers socializing outside of super battles!

Such a beautifully written story. I'm loving this!