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animearlinefreak
2009-11-29 . chapter 30
yeah I'm so glad you updated your story and I'm glad you shared this with everyone to enjoy! Thanks!
Tatsuki Okamura
2008-10-06 . chapter 30
Wow. Speechless. Love it.
Tatsuki Okamura
2008-10-06 . chapter 4
Falling in love with this story, though they are my favorite couple/characters in the book. ^^
O'Donnell's Girl
2008-09-04 . chapter 30
Chapter 29/Story 29 whatever. I really like that one. It should be expanded upon. or something. Also, these are really cute. You have so many writing styles, comparable to that of Scott Westerfeld. Like he writes in so many ways at many levels and you are clearly capable of that yourself. Good job!
Kyrene once Blood Roses
2008-07-09 . chapter 30
Took me quite some time but I finally finished this. And I must say...You can't tell me Subaru's not a virgin and leave it at that! Psh...So if that suggestion is still up, I'd like to hear more about that. I mean, not like one could keep something like that from your girlfriend...I'm sorry...I just completely zeroed in on that, lol. But yea, I adore these two. And your way of writing them is wonderful.
Higura Natume
2008-06-12 . chapter 1
never heard of perfect blue but that was hecka cute! XD
HarunoRin
2008-06-07 . chapter 30
oh awesome story :P I love these 30 themes things ^_^ That last one was soo cute I loved it =D
MacFluffers
2008-02-16 . chapter 30
I was digging around on the internet, and this is the only AkanexSubaru fic I could find anywhere! But even if it is the only one that exists, it has been made really well. I especially admire the way each one is organized. Some of them are not particularly special in this aspect, but some of them--the last one, for example--were impressively arranged.

I do hope you make a longer fanfiction out of one of these, although I can't say which one should be expanded; I suppose I would be content with any of them. I'd be happy with anything AkanexSubaru, actually. Akane and Subaru were half the reason I read Hot Gimmick. (The other half was that I was hoping Shinogu and Hatsumi would be together at the end. :P)
Roseability
2007-11-24 . chapter 2
I love this pairing! Keep it up, you are an awesome writer.
postal service
2007-11-15 . chapter 30
I suppose chapter 29 has potential.
anonymousreader07
2007-11-14 . chapter 30
Congragulations on finishing Unhindered Kisses though I hate to see it go =( But I would love to see 'He hadn't meant it' turned into a full story it sounds like it has a lot of potential. But whatever story you choose just make sure you dont stop writing!
Mrs Ootori-chan
2007-11-10 . chapter 4
aww so sweet! lol i love subaru and akane's relationship in hot gimmick lol its so sweet ^^ aw lol and these stories are perfect ^^ hehe
jade30
2007-11-05 . chapter 30
this is definitely my favorite one. i'm so sad that it's over! please consider starting a new set!
pokey
2007-11-04 . chapter 30
I can't belive it's over- I'm going to miss these so much. i'm happy to here that you are thinking about writing longer fics though, I'll definetly be reading them if you do.

As for which one-shots whould be good longer fics-I really loved Damn the Plumbing and An Alternative, they could make great longer stories. Other favorites of mine were: His Darker Side(I like anyone where Akane's going after him and I thought that Subaru's responce was really intresting in that one), They Left Her Alone(because I always felt bad how Akane is just left out of all her family's stuff-her brother only ever seems to be thinking of Hatsumi's feeling and never Akane's and I think Subaru would get that), Afraid To Be Expecting(because the look between them at the end could have meant so many things: that he knew something was wrong, that he was the boy invovled(AU), or that he just looks at her way to much), and Blame the Fence(it's just cute and funny one and like I said I like it when she goes after him).

I just wanted to say again how much I've enjoyed reading these. Thank you so much for sharing them.
Me
2007-11-03 . chapter 29
'Twas very touching, I liked it. The little aside about her not telling anyone where she was fit in perfectly. ^.^
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