wow! I would like to read more from this fanfic! I am hoping for more update! this is one of the best vampire fic with the shiznat pair!

Gambare!

HOPE TO HAVE MORE OF THIS FANFICTION. I'LL BE WAITING FOR THIS ONE.

AH I MUST HAVE DA NXT CHP! O_O i rly like this fic; vampires yay! xD it looks like the main conflict is resolving?? but who knows!

im surprised natsuki easily gave her real name to shizuru haha but im rly lookn forward as to how they will get closer to one anotha :] hope u update soon ^^

haha out of the many shiznat vampire fics, this has got to be the one that kept me hanging around the cliffs the longest XD I like how there are arcs in this... so I can tell this is gonna be a long and worth while fanfic =] There is also a fairly equal amount of seriousness and Fluff at the same time. The mood swings shizuru has, kinda creeps me out...but its hot nonetheless lol. And Nao's mood swings? Well she is nao after all XP I definitely love nao in this fic, you've really taken note of her character and made her just as verbally awesome as she was in mai hime >:D which makes you a just-as-awesome writer. The chiexaoi-ness is freaking cute as well! and the omakes... omg I worship your creative mind O_O Anyways, I will not stone you for the late updating lmao. I understand how busy people can get ^_^" (I know from experience.) :P However, you are leaving a hole in my heart here, from the cliff hangers >.< rofl, so please update soon! And I can't wait for your magnificent next chapter. ^-^ I will favourite, and subscribe! And I just hope you haven't abandoned this fic lol. I'd kill myself if you do o.o (notices you haven't updated in a while) This is an excellent story, and you are an awesome author. I will continue supporting you if it's D last thing i do. Love you!! :3
PS. I read this all in a day X3

I think I've mentioned before how much I loved this battle scene. It was very fast paced, and I could really visualize the entire action packed chapter. :D It was very well written, I myself am very horrible at writing fighting scenes, so I really enjoyed this chapter.

I loved Shizuru's question: Don't you want to be loved?

It is really a simple question, one that most would say yes to. However Natsuki not wanting Shizuru to exploit this refuses. I rather liked how stubborn she is.

During the fighting I have to say that I'm a little sad that Natsuki didn't surprise Shizuru in the least bit with her skills. I suppose Shizuru has far too great an advantage in battle being the more seasoned fighter. *sigh* Poor Natsuki, you got your bum handed to you. XD

Well great chapter, as always!

Jyuami

One of the dynamics that I absolutely love about BloodLust is the way you develop the three lead characters, Nao, Natsuki, and Shizuru. You are doing a good job with giving depth to Natsuki and Nao in the chapters thus far. (^__^)b And I know you will do the same for Shizuru in the later chapters too. ;)

I always enjoy the fact that Matsuki and Nao have very many similarities in your story. It makes them draw closer together because of the familiarity of their situation. :D Natsuki is kind, and gentle, even though she's very stubborn and hardheadded sometimes. I loved the part where Natsuki simply allows Nao to cry on her shoulder. Methinks that should Shizuru have been watching she would have be jealous. XD

Nicely done!

Jyuami

I totally enjoyed Shizuru's appearance! So very like Shizuru to flirt with Natsuki. I liked how Shizuru said 'what a cute body' it reminded me of what Shizuru said to Natsuki in the manga. ;)

That and Natsuki is just so charming when she doesn't even know she's being charming is just so...adorable! XD

I'm sure when Natsuki tailed Nao on the second night and sent her home, Nao must have been very **. But oh the development of Chie's appearance! I don't know if I commented on it already or not, but it is such a funny pun that she comes from the country of yurikuni. but then, hey, it works. ;)

- Jyuami

Nice chapter two! Way to go at introducing Natsuki's origins and Nao's "activities" o.O. I thought it was interesting that Nao complains that Natsuki is using 'adult language' when she's not an adult. well how else is she supposed to speak? XD

Having a blushing Nao is so cute, because unlike Natsuki, with Nao's red hair, and then blushing, you would only see lime green eyes! ^_^

Oh I thought it was interesting that Nao got upset that Natsuki called her 'Juliet.' Calling it a disgusting name. It makes sense since she almost never goes by that name in My Otome. :D I like that link you've got there. ;)

-Jyuami

Hey Uchiha-chan!

I forgot what was going on in this au'some story. XP Yes being away for long has blanked out my memory, and so at an attempt to try and sound intelligent, I'm gonna re-read this from chapter one! That way when I get to where I left off, I won't sound like a total idiot. haha ^~^;

Okays!

First off, I liked this chapter. Why? Well because of the unique way you describe things. You did a great job with the fight scene too. I liked the speed of the first chapter. It was such an attention getter and I absolutely loved that ending of chapter one.

--With a smirk, the blue hair girl threw a final sentence at him.

“Vampire hunter D. D for Duran. That's my codename.”-

Oh yeah, I can totally see Natsuki doing an ultra sexy hair flip as she steps out of the bar! XD Oh yeah, she'll have fan girls/guys in an instant with that move! XD

-Jyuami

ha poor natsuki so tormented good story =]

Well its been a while but I'm still here and I hope you are too cuz I'm still reading your story so you better keep updating it!

Ahh, it was getting really interesting when the chapter ended
Update soon (only if you can)? :D

Aww, that was a cute scene between Aoi and Chie :)

I'm just curious, but where did you get the idea of the name Wunderkind? I know a song with that name, so I'm just wondering, lool

Wow, I never thought Zhang could be evil. He seemed so nice before.
Yay! ChieAoi-ness! :))