| Reviews for The Heart of His Fan |
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Enma20 4/16/12 . chapter 1*thumbs up* ;9 |
Missmybcmiyuki 3/1/11 . chapter 1while i do like this couple, i've never thought of reading a story about them. but after reading this i think i want to read more. i've only read some of the manga and seen only a few seasons of the anime. so i'm not sure i know the characters well enough to notice if any were acting OOC. all i know is that a reallly liked reading this. at the end i couldn't shake off the grin a had. it was just so cute of a story. *heart* |
A.C 6/12/10 . chapter 1 nice |
scrubsuit 12/27/09 . chapter 1 40 degrees Celsius? That wasn't high fever, that's seizure. (stating a medical fact) you should've researched or proof read this before you actually post, and should've considered that some of your readers might actually know about medicine. Its awkward to read about the fever, because you exaggerated. Like i said, if your plot has got something to do with real life occurrences, it's be your responsibility to have a little research about it. |
Hiei's Cute Girl 8/9/09 . chapter 1I loved this! The vague hints, Ryoma's worry, and her clear (and obtuse) adorableness made me laugh. (Momo is the best, seriously... he must have been laughing on the inside at Ryoma.) Philantropist... it really sounds like an extremely insulting word until you know the meaning. XD |
Different Child 5/27/09 . chapter 1Cute |
PynkPlayar 2/28/09 . chapter 1Really well written! Sophisticated, but easy to understand. Haha, I had a feeling Ryoma was the one who caught her in the beginning. I like the subtleness of the RyoSaku in this oneshot. Keep writing! |
Harumaki 8/30/08 . chapter 1I really liked this. It was a nice, subtle romance |
astraldrop11 11/22/07 . chapter 1The immense determination of Sakuno to go to the match was really gratifying and cheering and positive, even though she's sick by that time, and also the way you portrayed the 'two persons holding the racket' was my favorite part. Whoah. My password is written here also. LOL XD. so cute. so charming. so endearing. keep up! another story on my fave list. *high fives* gambatte for your upcoming fics! -astraldrop11- .:RyomaPlusSakunoEqualsLove:. |
ThisWasOnceAnActiveAccount 11/18/07 . chapter 1wow! Saku-chan is so determined! love it! |
reiin 11/2/07 . chapter 1i like this one.. cute... hehe |
Kountry101 10/31/07 . chapter 1Aw! Very well written! . |
orthonym 9/29/07 . chapter 1..lol.. your dedication in the beginning makes me lol.. :) so very very very good story! :) pinoy? yeheey -shin- |
rookie-chan 9/23/07 . chapter 1x suu! a very cute ryosaku fanfic! did you said that it was your first time writing a POT fanfic? waa? are you sure? -snickers- seems like not! yeah another ryosaku fan here! _ i really lurvee your style of writing. waa! you're a very great author! i love the part where he said "You are always there" and his description of saying that it looks like there are two persons holding the racket... x umf kawaii! waahahaha, reading this fanfic while playing the song "Thank you for by Ryoma Echizen" or "Futari" will be great! _ waa, this story goes to my faves and c2 archive! gambatte ne! rookie-chan |
Michelicious 7/22/07 . chapter 1enjoyable and really cute... hmm they werent really as OOC as you pretended them to be you know... I really liked your choices of words though thank you so much for this nice story! C ya ! michelicious |