LOL, a perfect description of James.

Hey, it's Sabrina from The Marauders' Hogwarts forum!

This fic is so cute. I love it. It's funny, it's charming... It's going on my favorites list.

*goes off to read more of your fanfiction*

Aww how sweet! Love the story, and love James Potter! lol ;)

Wow...so true...aah...*gazes into space*

Ahem! Anyways...uh, *nervous laugh*, that was amazing! I loved it! You are such an amazing writer, I can't even explain. Beautiful!

OMG, that's so incredibly cute! I LOVE it!

cute!

I never really thought about this...hahaha, and it's actually not fluff so much as reality. Fluff is part of love, as much as we pretend it's immature and all of that :) Good job, sorry I haven't read this before...me gusta mucho!
Please keep writing; your work is really sweet and I love your characterizations.
Love,
Ivy :)

How cute!!

I love this!

As others have said, we hear so much of why James loves Lily, but not so much of the other way around. You've pulled it off really well, it's sweet but not mawkish.

Well done.

My GOD !! I love it!! That's one of the best stories I've read! How did you do that? I'm now your number one biggest fan !

And at first I didn't want to read it but my friend told me it's super and it really is! Gosh, thank god I read it or I would have missed something BIG, something GREAT

sorry for the long message, it's just that I haven't read something really good for a long time!

This is probably the best story that I have ever read! I love how you explain the details so well; I have to agree with Lily, it does make me want to jump on him. THe little problem with that is...Lily can jump on him, while I would simply land on my computer, hit my head on the desk, and wake up in a hospital bed...

I think that Lily doesn't realize what an advantage she has with being in love with someone who actually exists in her worl :)

Also, I'd just like to ask...is this a one shot? You never said if it was...

Aw, very sweet!

I love this, pretty original since it is usually James saying what he loves about Lily. Refreshing to see a new point of view.

But still, the way you described James makes me want to date him! I guess that's why we all love him.

Cheers!

adorable. i loved it.

I like the story. It's really good.