Wow! Grievous is going to be responsible for the capture of Obi Wan!

Cool!

Poor Shanzah…

Nice and interesting chapter, mate!

WW

Awesome, very thorough story. The bit with Asajj duelling Grievous was very cool. Please update.

Great and interesting chapter, mate!

Ah! Take that, Viceroy!

Poor Grievous, he really is a puppet in all this.

Update soon, please.

WW

Excellent! Maybe you could review mine...please?

I made three new stories and got zip reviews...

Poor, poor Nute Gunray…

Ah! I bet that he had to change his underwear after that threat!

Go, Grievous!

WW

Very good, I like Nute Gunray/ General Grievous conferatations, as you can see, I put a lot of them in my story, great job.

Jango Fett? Oh, boy! This is getting really interesting.

Nice chapter, mate! Keep up the good work!

WW

Wow! Dooku risked a lot with the Padawan.

It’s a great chapter, in which we discover more about Grievous and his son Shanzah. The character’s development in this chapter is very interesting.

WW

hey General I cant talk to you with out the PM on. Its not. And Im going to work on General's Dilemma right now

umm... im not quite sure this is how he became a cyborg, try reading more info on grievous in books not the net, he already was
in sideous' and dooku's power, but in proper form, then his shuttle crashed so sideous tried to save him by turning him into a cyborg, my version's a bit warped on my grievous hunts, but why am i acting like a grievous spoff? it's your story and your ideas

Very good chapter.

But you need to review mine...

nice story there are not many storise on General Grievous and many of them are not very good. Too bad shanzah lost sight in his eye. I hope you upadate

Wow! And we even have suspense in this one.

Who is this intruder? A Jedi?

Nice chapter!

“Shanzah was interrupted by Grievous’ metal hand swiping him across the face.”

Wow! Grievous can be really mean to his son.

I particularly liked the part about the memory.

Keep up the good work, mate.

A quite interesting chapter, since Grievous is training his son into becoming a Warrior.

I wonder what Grievous plans to do with his son…