I just finished reading this whole story and I had to take a moment to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I found it through a friend, started reading it at work and ended up printing out the whole story so I could curl up with it.

I loved the plotline and the characters were well written (although Dealins as a bit harder than usual). You captured Bobby and Alex well. You had me bawling when Emil (and Alex) wouldn't let him see her. I just boo hooed. I also loved the ending with Logan. I knew he wouldn't just let the guy die, although I probably would have.

I don't know if you have any plans for more BA fics, but I hope you do.

Thanks for giving us all such a wonderful story. Now I'm off to read the one you recommended--Quietly.

This was an amazing story. Spot on for psychology and character interaction. And it made me CRY, so you KNOW I liked it. :)

I thought you said her mom was a nurse?

“Are you here to tell me that you know this because you’re Goren’s one and only true love or doesn’t Goren know this yet?”
Fabulous line. When I read this I nearly spit tea all over my computer before I dissolved into laughter.

Just wanted to tell you im enjoying this story immensely. and the great thing bout fanfic is you can write them totally ooc if u want! im replying from my ghetto phone thus the lousy typing

just found and finished reading this whole story - loved it!!

I am *really* digging this story.

I love how you write Mike. It's Logan to a T. ;) “I haven’t seen a nightgown like that since Grandma Logan died.”

Yeah, it's official. I really love this story.

It's incredible.

Kudos Plot Mistress. Kudos.

Intense beginning. But really interesting. I like the way you write and the strained (yet darkly amusing) dialogue between Goren and Eames.

Just re-read the entire story. It is a mastery. Can't wait for your next one, hope to see a new one soon.

Good story. You were a little ooc at some points and there seemed to missing words, but otherwise a great story. I loved the plot twists every step of the way. And the part with the teeshirt after she hits him with the golf club - gold. Great job!

Knicks, not nicks. This chapter was better this time. And I've been here the whole time, I just forget to review.

Look, this story is good but Deakins and Bobby are really out of character. Deakins is really nasty, and Bobby's getting gooey.

Okay, this whole Alex seducing Bobby in his dreams is aliitle weird, but ohter that that, the story's good.