Oh...that was sad. Poor Winry.

Great job!

Aww...that was really sad...I actually almost cried! Wow, I'm just simply amazed by your outstanding writing. Cliche of me to say I know, but I mean it.

Thank you. Lovely story.

I'm so glad you caught the fic bug again. It's not the fluff you said you'd write, but it's such gloriously awesome angst (I still expect the fluff, of course). Write more.

First of all, I would like to thank you for portraying Winry accurately. There's so much anti!Winry presence on this website it scares me sometimes. O_o I'm absolutely enthralled by the way you described the Elrics brothers and their situation, as well as Winry's ties to that. There's a lot of feeling in your words - and it is a feeling that I think fits Winry perfectly. It's not over-done and overflowing with purple prose, but it's not so simple as to not provoke any thoughts. The final sentence ties the underlying theme together wonderfully. :) A job well done!

Kalliel
*adds to favourites*