*Realization dawns on face* So THAT'S how Lily and James got together!

I like Sirius' dancing. Nice hip thrusts. Awesome story!

I think that was kind of sudden, they should have been friends first, but, I still love the story!

LOVE teh part about Remus' hair beingtoo brown. Poor James... he has no chance with Evans.

Oh, how I love Minerva. And I'm glad James isn't changing too much - I like him the way he is!

I like this chapter, but I never envisioned Sirius as letting James see him upset over something like that. I've always seen him as the guy who will grin cheerfully till he died for James/Remus/Peter. Of course, James/Remus would probably see there was a problem quickly, but I never thought Sirius would be that obvious.

One question - is this story from after DH came out? In other words, does Snape have the history with Lily? Was the fact that the 'mudblood' was smarter than James supposed to be a twisted compliment. Gods above, I hope not.

You see, this is when I feel I'm shirking my responsibilites as a reveiwer. This is a very good fanfic - I don't have anything to critize! But then I'm here for constructive critism! So, you're doing great, I'm loving the interactions between the boys. Keep it up!

Okay, I love your discriptions of the monlight - and I really like your furry little problem time. I also like your dialouge - Sirius's "it's just so funny when her face goes that purple color!" and Madam Pomfrey's "get out of my ward or you will die" both made me laugh. Onward and upward to the next chapter!

Hm. James must behave for more than a day. This should be interesting...

I think James is doing well on the 'gallantry' front, but maybe he and Sirius need an extra dose of IQ. (By the way, I can totally see Sirius flicking stuff and people, and Lily getting all **/suspisous at/of James. FYI.)

Okay, this one is good - I think you've got the whole 17-year-old boys thing down pat - you do it very well. I really like the way you wrote Remus and Lily, but I think James could be a wee bit more intelligent. On the other hand, he's in love, and I've yet to meet someone who's not a complete and utter moron when they're in love. Now, to see how James handles not pranking...

your stories are so good! i love them all! they actually made me laugh out loud, which isnt something i normally do at online stories. it is officially your fault tha my family think i am crazy. anyway, just wanted to say well done for some really amazng stories

I really enjoyed this story and i have begunt to read the sequel to it. I really like the characters. I enjoy the fact that you made the Marauders into normal teenage boys, all with a great sense of humor. Even Lily has a good sense of humor, and is not just full of spite and irritance towards the Marauders. The characters are well developed--Sirius isn't just a ladies man, and James doesn't just pine for Lily-he understands the importance of friendship. I like Remus is well developed, and even how you showed Peter to be a normal kid (i look forward to you writing about him being corrupted) and the fact that you didn't shunt the latter two Marauders into the background. All in all, i think this is one of the better Marauder-era fics i have read! You make me laugh at their antics, and I am already in love with the characters!

Haha I had to re-read to understand Lily's present.