|Reviews for Triad|
| fallenxfate 4/21/06 . chapter 2
I really like it so far! I /know/ you've been on recently, 'cause you commented on my story. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens to Leeva.
| blondie91 3/29/06 . chapter 2
Out of the two chapters in this fic, I would most definitely say this was the better one. Although my memory of the first chapter isn't all that great since it's been a while, but I do remember what all happened. .
'They were blue before I was a Sheikah though, or at least that’s what I’ve been told.' That single statement really left me confused. Was there a time when she wasn't a Sheikah? If so, how in the world did she become a part of a different race? Or am I just interpretting this in the wrong way?
I really liked this chapter, it was definitely a good read. And I believe it was longer. . But of course, it's the quality that counts over the quantity and this had some great quality! Remember to keep up the awesome work and I'll be looking forward to an update from you so please update as soon as you can! I can be patient...sometimes :D lol.
| Bakalakadakaman 2/6/06 . chapter 1
*Applause* This is such a great story!Keep going I want to see what happens next!
| blondie91 2/4/06 . chapter 1
Interesting start, I look forward to seeing how this is going to turn out.
One problem area though:
'Leeva, the girl who had been watching, realized that he was going to start looking into the houses, so she rushed back into her bed and pretended to be having a nightmare to cover her racing breath and heartbeat. He looked directly at her, but he believed only what he saw, a girl having a nightmare. Off handedly to himself he said, “Just like this girl all the people will live in a nightmare, except it will be real.” Then he laughed again, his cold and heartless laugh, and he went back into his carriage.'
Um, it says she knew he was going to start looking into the houses, but it never actually said that he went into her house and all of a sudden he sees her having a 'nightmare'...yeah...That kind of caught me off guard and confused me at first.
But other than that, I didn't find any other mistakes so here's a good job and whoo-hoo for you! lol .