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| Brukaoru 2008-09-23 ch 1, | abuseA great one-shot! Well written and a excellent plot. I can totally see Virgil having a nose bleed, hehe. Very funny, nice work! :D |
| Alexandritee 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseOHMYGOD. PMSL. I love you for this. Really. I can just imagine this really happening (if the world of DMC existed). Your writing is amazing and this whole plot is amazing. You're amazing! Y'know, normal good ff's usually get the Alex-seal-of-approval, but for this you get Congratulations-for-making-Alex-pee-herself-laughing-seal-of-approval. -Alex x (: |
| RikkuDevil 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abusegood story keep up tha good writen tho :) injoyd dis story very much good laugh |
| flight815surviver 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was just brilliant. You making me laugh so much my dogs are acually very scared now. poor smelly babys. great s |
| lori gourlay 2007-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseTheres only one thing wrong with this story...its too funny!! ah I loved it all really!! |
| Trayne 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI couldn't help but laugh. I know from personal experience that pouring iced tea all over yourself is a great way to cool down! ...granted, it happened to me by accident, but still... Somehow, Vergil being a hormonal brat fits. XD |
| Nowshin 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was fantastic!And hot too ^_^ |
| XxNadsxX 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseWOW. Just...wow. You are so awesome at writing fanfiction (and writing in general~), I LOVE your style, and I love how funny this 'fic was, with the continual flashing of Lady's boobs in Vergil's face and his reactions to it~ xD Oh my God, this story was priceless, I love how serious, homicidal Son-of-Sparda that Vergil is, even he managed to get a nosebleed from a female flashing incident. I love the ending with Dante's confusion and I love their time in the laundromat where they just suddenly throw themselves on eachother. This 'fic was just SO cute and funny and I love your portrayal of all the characters. Definitely a favorite. WRITE MORE STUFF. I'm looking forward to it! |
| VengefulMoon 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseVM: Quote: 'I did not see that, I did not see that,' he repeated to himself in quick succession. However as he stared at the Trixx rabbit it somehow morphed into an image of Lady’s naked boobs. '...oh Hell's bells, I did see that!' LOL! THIS IS ONE FUNNY FIC! Write more! Vergil: What am I, some sort of goose? I'm going to get you for this! Dante: Beware the wrath of my brother... |
| Greatwork! 2006-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! This story is so good! I love it! Please update on your other Devil May Cry stories too! They are soo good, but this is one of my favourites! It's so great! |
| Nephylim 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI am loving your writing style. I love the images used in the story. There was a nice balance of humor in there. I think you portrayed everyone well. I have been getting really hooked into DMC3 and I wanted to find fanfics with Vergil was the main char. You have made me a bigger fan of Vergil. Wonderful job. |
| anon 2006-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abusemm this is the hotest fic ever. More please of this. |
| JesterLovesKalina 2006-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love these stories! plz continue this or make more k?? kthnx love to ya babe ~ |
| eatflesh 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very nice. Amazing writing, lovely concept. Fabulous. A definite favorite! I hope this message doesn't double post. |
| DevilsNeverDie 2006-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a tempting couple and quite so by the way you write it. Very beautiful writing skills you have. I wish you the best in all your stories. |