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lil'shinigami
2009-10-02 . chapter 7
OMG... what a major cliffy... please update soon... i want to know how would they arrange their relationship... more power to you!

--lil'shinigami
rin
2009-08-30 . chapter 7
update soon please!
HEHEHE Sunako has gone loco
trinity-tragedy
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I knew it would be fluffy pink handcuffs! Priceless! Also:





I nearly *wet* myself reading this bit! This story is all kinds of awesome. Can't wait to read the next part.


T.
kawaiighurl
2009-07-23 . chapter 7
that was BRILLIANT!!I love this story..:D pls update very soon tnxz..^^
kawaiighurl
2009-07-22 . chapter 2
OHMYGOSH!this is soo funny!!:D
Johonna Marie
2009-07-21 . chapter 7
more plz, this is so orginal and good i can't wait for more!
nihongoneko
2009-07-14 . chapter 7
"You know your own character well enough; I'm just saying it would be the perfect antidote to any romantic situation."

"Shh...Horror girl is boyfriend hunting."

The sound of something metal made him wince. 'God she has a weapon.'

You're staying like that till you work out your relationship.

These were some of my favorite parts! :) I loved this chapter! It was so FUNNY! I couldn't help laughing through the whole thing. :) And the fact that the people in the market were all helping her was nice, even though Sunako is strange (and was even stranger then). It shows how much other people actually like her as a person. :) The ending of the chapter was especially great. :) I can't wait to find out what happens next! And, in my personal opinion, the punctuation marks didn't matter that much (with the whole format not being recognized thing, that is). It's still very readable and fun to read, and didn't distract from the story, so I barely cared or even noticed. Anyway, great job on this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one when you post it!
sincerely, nihongoneko
Mya84
2009-07-02 . chapter 7
ZOMG! i love it! yu absolutely need to write more!!
gokillfanboys
2009-06-27 . chapter 7
wow... nice. I feel sorry to kyohei. i can't ait to see the next chapter.
Hououza
2009-06-25 . chapter 7
Excellent chapter.

Oh dear, just when it looked like he'd managed to sort it all out...they go and do that.

Well, I suppose all they need to do is torture Ranmaru until he hands over the handcuffs...assuming he knows where they are.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
erin
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
awsome!
Superknight123
2009-06-24 . chapter 7
Keep going, this is an interesting story. I have to congratulate you on an original plot, most of the time I'm reading things that are too parallel to other stories, but this is a fresh face for fun reading.

Please keep up the good work, and hope that your next chapter comes quickly.

-R
anitsirhc
2009-06-24 . chapter 7
haha...cool..update soon! =)
anitsirhc
2009-01-23 . chapter 6
mou... i want more! update soon! loved the story and it is getting more interesting as the chapter goes by. keep up the great job! :)
davinci'sdaughter
2008-10-29 . chapter 6
pls update u have a nice plot
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