 lil'shinigami 2009-10-02 . chapter 7OMG... what a major cliffy... please update soon... i want to know how would they arrange their relationship... more power to you!
--lil'shinigami |
 rin 2009-08-30 . chapter 7 update soon please!
HEHEHE Sunako has gone loco |
 trinity-tragedy 2009-08-10 . chapter 7BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I knew it would be fluffy pink handcuffs! Priceless! Also:
I nearly *wet* myself reading this bit! This story is all kinds of awesome. Can't wait to read the next part.
T. |
 kawaiighurl 2009-07-23 . chapter 7that was BRILLIANT!!I love this story..:D pls update very soon tnxz..^^ |
 kawaiighurl 2009-07-22 . chapter 2OHMYGOSH!this is soo funny!!:D |
 Johonna Marie 2009-07-21 . chapter 7more plz, this is so orginal and good i can't wait for more! |
 nihongoneko 2009-07-14 . chapter 7"You know your own character well enough; I'm just saying it would be the perfect antidote to any romantic situation."
"Shh...Horror girl is boyfriend hunting."
The sound of something metal made him wince. 'God she has a weapon.'
You're staying like that till you work out your relationship.
These were some of my favorite parts! :) I loved this chapter! It was so FUNNY! I couldn't help laughing through the whole thing. :) And the fact that the people in the market were all helping her was nice, even though Sunako is strange (and was even stranger then). It shows how much other people actually like her as a person. :) The ending of the chapter was especially great. :) I can't wait to find out what happens next! And, in my personal opinion, the punctuation marks didn't matter that much (with the whole format not being recognized thing, that is). It's still very readable and fun to read, and didn't distract from the story, so I barely cared or even noticed. Anyway, great job on this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one when you post it!
sincerely, nihongoneko |
 Mya84 2009-07-02 . chapter 7ZOMG! i love it! yu absolutely need to write more!! |
 gokillfanboys 2009-06-27 . chapter 7 wow... nice. I feel sorry to kyohei. i can't ait to see the next chapter. |
 Hououza 2009-06-25 . chapter 7Excellent chapter.
Oh dear, just when it looked like he'd managed to sort it all out...they go and do that.
Well, I suppose all they need to do is torture Ranmaru until he hands over the handcuffs...assuming he knows where they are.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza |
 erin 2009-06-25 . chapter 1 awsome! |
 Superknight123 2009-06-24 . chapter 7Keep going, this is an interesting story. I have to congratulate you on an original plot, most of the time I'm reading things that are too parallel to other stories, but this is a fresh face for fun reading.
Please keep up the good work, and hope that your next chapter comes quickly.
-R |
 anitsirhc 2009-06-24 . chapter 7haha...cool..update soon! =) |
 anitsirhc 2009-01-23 . chapter 6mou... i want more! update soon! loved the story and it is getting more interesting as the chapter goes by. keep up the great job! :) |
 davinci'sdaughter 2008-10-29 . chapter 6pls update u have a nice plot |