This was amazing! I loved every single bit of it! Though i felt really bad for marik and how things ended up for him, but it was an interesting ending. Keep on writing!

This story... So amazing...

Wow, really great story. I was practically crying at the end, so heart-wrenchingly sad, and yet so good! The way you developed the characters was perfect, and just, I don't know, it was really deep, and made me think. So props to you, this story rocked, nice job!

I think i cryed at the end. although i am not a fan of rape stories, i like this one. it made a lot of sence. I love Marik x ryou stories. and i did cry when marik forgot everything.

Sarina the She Demon

Btw. Did i spell sence wrong?

This story is amazing! It really get's under your skin and makes you think! I love it so much! I look forward to reading it again sometime!

Well, that's such so a heart wrenching story... So much emotion going on here and there, and so tragic too... You bring out the best and the worst out so perfectly, it makes my heart break into pieces cause it so beautiful! Keep writing up your stories _

Lex

Wow, I think I might cr- too late. P Very emotional, I must say, you can feel the ache and pain of the characters. I mean literally! Good job!

Brilliant story! I seriously felt for Mariks, Bakuras, and Ryous situations, how each of them were feeling during this whole ordeal. I loved the angst, loneliness, and Fake Ryou (he just added a little more that wasn't expected .). Curious, though, is there a sequel?

Oh. Gawd. That was so emotional and beautiful. It kinda hurt.

OH MY GOD. This was...just beautiful. So powerful and full of emotion...I loved it! Twisted and gorgeous, just the way I like my fanfiction. _ Great fic, HS.

CR

i love how you used the idea of identity in this. also, schizophrenic!marik wins all.

the ending gave me the heebie jeebies, when she called his name... *shivers*

all in all i went from like, "aww, marik!" to "holy shit marik wtf is wrong with you" o.O lol

this was a great read

oh. my. god. so i know this was written eons ago, but still.

what an amazing first chapter. i never review first chapters if a fic is complete; i usually wait till the end.

but this.

this was brilliant.

great setup, and oh does it make you ache for him.

loved the story and chapter. my question is there a continued virion

great story! really sad, but i still like it!

Already I can taste the angst...