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| dragon-cloud16 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseYou really need to update the Private Bets soon. This one has Ranma dealing with the Nekoken, chaos, crossovers, and Ranma being the target of numerous women. You need to get back to work on your fics, especially the Private Bets. |
| dogbertcarroll 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuse*blink* |
| AscendedWarrior 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is possilby the most disturbing thing I've read in quite awhile... and one of the funniest :D |
| iceland 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseit was a funny story to read and wonder if you have anymore funny stories like this. |
| Gundum M 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abusethis is so funny i can't wait to see the next chapter. |
| Washu Experiment #563 2004-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseBwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! BWA HA HA HA HA HA! This is hilarious!! |
| spider 2001-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusethis has a very interesting start off psoint and it would be interesting to see where it goes from here. It would also be interesting to see exactly where Ranma ended up after his little scramble of horror to escape that evil demon(transformed genma). This has a lot of potential to become something rather interesting. |
| John Dunkelburg 2001-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHmm... This one might not be worth your effort to continue. I would concentrate on Bet#3 instead for the Ranma/Darkstalker crossover. |
| neko-chama 2001-09-10 ch 1, | abusethis one shows much promise. YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS ONE. |
| rowan_the_hairscyther 2001-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoooh, Widdle Wyoga doesn't get cursed. What if Ryoga LIKED all those Amazons glomping him? Ryoga Hibiki would be VERY busy at nights, being married to all those women and everything. Very cute story, but a sequal would be great. |
| Booksavvey 2001-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease please continue this. I really like the whole private bet story lines, but you haven't continued any of them and it is getting frustrating because I want to know what happens next. |
| Lee A. Hollensteiner 2001-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou appear to have made a good start, so now you have the more difficult job of developing that start. One thing of which you should be aware is that losing your focus can ruin the best start. Don't try to be Tolstoy with a vast cast of characters. Keep it simple to start until you have your story where you want it. Best wishes, Lee Hollensteiner |
| BlazeStryker 2001-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, Man, divine Justice is in effect, and NO ONE GETS OUT SANE!!! LoLlolOOLlOllllllll |
| Gale 2001-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start! keep it up |
| Sky 2001-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHee hee, this is amusing. I hope you're planning on continuing it : ) |