You must update. I love this story!

A little bit OCC but is it a Helena/Barbara pairing thing going on? I like this a lot and I hope you update soon.

*Princess of Gun Blades*

Is Alex the one from the OC? It doesn't really matter, but I was curious.. Also is this a Barbara/Helena fic or just general?

Anyway, I really like the way you've shown the interaction between characters, Helena's great.

Hope you update soon...

Great story! Hope you continue soon!