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| Emma 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...that was really well written, and so true to his character. Dark, but also very sweet and it would have fit perfectly in the episode. |
| BlackRaven 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done... I can definitely see this happening in "Scar" - exactly as if it was a missing scene from the episode... Great job! |
| tracyj23 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, that was sweet. And very totally Lee. I could picture that scene happening, and then him realizing it wasn't going to be returned. Poor guy. I feel bad for him, caring for her so much. He's desperately hung up on her the way she is on Anders. Nice writing - I enjoyed it. |
| storytellergirl 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved it--definitely a missing scene for that episode! Great job. |
| Dark Star 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseloved it! it was sweet, yet depressing. very well writen. great scene. wished they had showed it on the episode! oh well. Dark Star |
| Ash234 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was a perfect scene. Very well written, and it would have fit in perfectly. Great job! |