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| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-03-12 ch 16, | abuseWow. |
| kelticsgirl 2006-09-26 ch 16, | abusegreat story how soon for next one? |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-08-25 ch 16, | abuseAh damn...the killer HAD to be a red head. *huffs and leans back in chair* ALL the red heads either die or kill people...in like EVERY story...that sucks...*sigh* Good book though...I really liked it XD |
| Watcom 2006-07-12 ch 16, | abuseI should have done the sooner, but I just wanted to say what a wonderful story. I have been re-reading the stories that stuck in my mind and this was one of them. You kept me on the edge throughout the 15 chapters, it was well written and the interplay between Nick and Warrick was great. Thank you. |
| rozzy07 2006-05-09 ch 16, | abuseFeel totally lame in not posting a final review sooner but RL & FanFiction net for a while totally screwed up with all my responses...so... let me just say how happy I was at reading the ending of this simply compelling piece of writing. You kept the suspense ongoing, ever building, ever more dangerous with each new chapter and perversely kept the battering and angst equally the same ... which of course I enjoyed immensely (sicko I admit but it's delicious fun isn't it?!?!?). Really seriously looking forward to whatever you post next. |
| astalder27 2006-04-24 ch 16, | abuseAHH! So sorry for not reviewing, ive been so busy! But, ive still been reading so dont worry about that! I have spring break this week (YES!) so ive taken the job of joinging throuhg all my author alerts and reviewing everything i can! LOL I just wanted to say, I LOVED this story and i hope you make a sequel..(what happens to Amber? How will this effect everyone? Is that guy going to be fired for leaving the CSI's out in a storm BY THEMSLEVES! That should definently happen!) OO Cant wait for the new story! Ill have to go re-read Poisenous Fear now! |
| rojaji 2006-04-09 ch 16, | abuseaw *sniffles* its over? *sobs uncontrollably* poor nicky, his grief over losing his friend was so real. he's still getting over all the gd stuff, and then to have to go through all that and lose a good friend too. “Its okay, Nicky.” “No, not this time.” gah! *sniffle* oh my poor nicky. but then right after, you make me laugh: 'Grissom reached for his phone and flipped it open. The looks he received at doing something so simple was almost scary, but he ignored the others. It was just a simple cell phone after all. They all had one.' I love motherly cath, btw. she kicks **. And now we're going to have to wait awhile for your new ones? suck! But you're still going to write the happy one for me? JOY! can't wait! ;D |
| chrissie0707 2006-04-06 ch 16, | abuseHey! Very emotional final chapter. Very much so. Not that it's a bad thing. This was a really great story - you got the whole suspense thing down. Definitely gotta give you that. Hope all is going well with your next story, and I'll wait for it. Great job! Chrissie |
| NicknGrisfan 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abuseYou say on your next chapter, Nick and Warrick are not going to get hurt. Yeah, Right. How fun is that going it to be? You always hurt Nick more then you did Warrick. You did a good job with this story. |
| Miss Courtney x 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abuse*Applauds* Great job, fabulous ending! I really hope you have your next ff posted soon! Courtney |
| karmine 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abuseAll around AWESOME story! I really really really enjoyed it! I have to thank you... ThAnK yOu for not adding Sara! I know it sounds mean but I don't really like her. Well yeah... Excellent story! |
| thebondgirl 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abusewoa -- pretty figgin intense there!:):) absolutely LOVED this fic!! i'm sorry that it's over, you know, having been here from chapter 1, but i'm happy that it ended the way it did, not skipping out on the character's feelings, and the other cops' respect for the one of them that died - very touching! -, and even having grissom come out of his shell for a while for his team and andrew. yup, i have nothing but positive oppinions for this story, and could probably go on for a while, but i don't want to bore you, so i'll finish this up with saying that i loved it while it lasted, i'm sorry that it's over, and i'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff in the future!:):):) |
| weimfriend 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abuseWhat a great ending to a wonderful story, was sorry to see it end, but look forward to the next one, Loved Poisonous fear, one of my favorites can't wait for the next story, hey I leave on the 18th for a vacation any way you can post a few chapters before than(HA).Thanks for a wonderful story loved every minute of it Nancy |
| aLeX24 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abuse.wow. This was a fantastic story! Everything flowed so well and you explained everything and tied up everything quite nocely at the end. And this last chapter was especially great - the last paragraph: perfect. Great job! :) |
| knadineg 2006-04-05 ch 16, | abuseGreat story. It took me a minute to really get into it, but once I did I was hooked. You did a fantastic job building the storyline & I never would have guessed the kids were the criminals. This was an amazing story. I'm going to read Poinous Fear & will be anxiously awaiting for more stories from you. |