that was a great chapter... will jean tell scott about the voices in her head?

This is really good. Well if I was writing this I would have scott stay with Jean.. instead of that cow Emma. But it is your story do whatever you want

Pretty good keep writing

nice... but no happy endings? :(... lol... keep it up and i hope that there's going to be a wedding.

Ah a wedding at the mansion! What an event! I take it that Jean's acceptance didn't really surprise a lot of people. Given that Jean's a telepath, I' m surprised she didn't find out sooner. lol

But wedding plans aside, my Phoenix senses were definitley tingling as I read on! Something is brewing within Jean and it's definitely growing! I can't wait to see where this goes and given that it's a Phoenix story, I'm sure it will be great!

Keep up the excellent work my friend! I look forward to seeing the next chapter! Please update soon. Slickboy out.

Another good chapter. I liked a lot the way you explore Jean's emotions, from the moment she is beaming due to Scott's proposal to the moment she is restless due to the nightmares frightening her.

I'm also a comic devote, and Phoenix and Dark Phoenix Sagas are some of my favorite stories. Too bad Marvel has messed them over and again for the past twenty-five years.

I like. The characterization is good and the scenes enticing. It shows promise. Besides, you can't go wrong with Scott/Jean romance uses Phoenix Saga :D.

You mispelled on thing, thought. It's Jean Grey, no Jean gray.

I hope you continue. The Comics section needs more Scott/Jean. By the way, this is comicverse, but you're influenced by the movie, right?

please continue this fic! please! we need more jean/scott fics like these in the x-men comics section. this is really cool. all the phoenix storeis i've read weren't really good, but this is off to a great start! please update asap!

Jott 4Ever

yeah... continue it... it's a good start

Wow, nice start! Very ominous! I like it and I want to see more! Can't really go wrong with a good Phoenix story! I look forward to seeing the next chapter! Bring on the Phoenix and bring on the Scott/Jean! Keep it up and please update soon. Slickboy out.