I knew before I started the story that it was unfinished, so I don't hold that against you. And since it's been years since the last chapter, I know you aren't ever going to finish it. I will say that it was an great read for the ten chapters that were there. Just wish it had a proper ending. But then, I figure it works the same with tv shows . . . like say Firefly. It's up and cancelled and you never know what happens next, even if we did get a movie. Thanks for the read.

Interesting first chapter, though I'm not going to read an unfinished fic. Especially one that probably won't be completed. Tell ya what, I'll put it on story alert in case you decide to finish it. Though I must say it is common courtesy to take down a story if you decide to leave it unfinished... either that or let someone else take over the fic. Your call.

Great, another unfinished fic. Thanks for posting this and wasting my time.

Two years, and not a single update? Darn. Well, I'm going to put the story on my alert list anyway, just in case.

Ah, you can't leave it like that, you just can't! I sincerely hope you can get back to this story someday. You are a fantastic writer and I just really enjoyed this fanfic so far.

Oh, man, such a bad place to be left hanging ;(. Wonderful story, Please Please come back to it some day!

wow. i really enjoyed this story. had a lot of favorite parts. and would absolutely love to see how it would end. great story. i like the whole mook thing. and the reasons why simon hates jayne. would love to find out inara's past. that seemed really interesting. and i just love how mal manages to avoid doing things by stating captainly duties.

Argh! I didn't realize when I got sucked into this adventure that you hadn't finished it! How frustrating! This is an excellent story, and I'd love for you to continue.

I know it's been a while, but I really really love this story and I was wondering if you're gonna finish it, or at least add another chapter? Pretty please, with a cherry and whipped cream??

.. It seems that my review didn't quite transfer through.. huh. Anyway, I love it, but the "TBC" glaring at the end of the page is so killing me! Great job, love the story, thanks so much for sharing it!

Blah! (

Well the suspense didn't kill me do to the excessively distracting nature of real life. Here's hoping that the next chapter comes along before real life distracts me again. Fan fiction is much more amusing than real life after all.

you can't just leave it there! it's unkind. it's evil. it makes you a torturer of the reader's(my) mind and emotions!
please repent by adding a nother chapter!

*cough* enough with all that...
this was wonderfully written. jayne's character was right on track! great writing. add another chapter...pwease? *puppyeyes*

new to firefly fanfics and I love this one. Any chancew that it will be finished? Please?

FINISH FINISH!!