"Ass Ketchup" was my breaking point. Hilarious. I also loved the bit about kitty paws! Though the Britney Spears reference was...weird.

! hold wait one more, HA! okay :)

This was the funniest fanfic I have ever read!

This made me laugh so hard.

haha that was awesome! james is pretty retarded, but not as retarted as jessie made him out to be. but it was still awesome!

THAT WAS GOOD MAKE MORE HAHAHA

That was one of the funniest fanfics I've ever read!

Great job!

damn, that was brutal

I half-expected Jessie to violently sodomize James with a strap-on!

Funny! Awesome humor story!

Wonderfully hilarious! And it fits the Team Rocket trio so perfectly. OF COURSE they couldn't come up with any type of story with any substance. It makes complete sense that they would tear Ash apart... Although I don't think they would be quite so gruesome. And they've worked so hard to steal Pikachu, I HIGHLY doubt that they'd waste the effort by killing it just for revenge. You did a great job alternating between the three characters and their typed story.

That was the best! It was so Funny!

HAHAHAHAHAHHA aww that was brill!

How ORIGINAL! That had me laughin' and that's just amazing. I love you story... Please make more! You rock

Ah, that was great. :D I could so see Team Rocket doing something like that. And the part with Giovanni was the icing on the cake.

Funny stuff. Funny stuff...

Okay, that was funny. If grilled Pikachu taste anything like grilled rat than it is damn delicious! Nice to see that little Ass finally got what he had coming to him!

Peace. Keep It Sick.

Sickly.