That was one of the funniest fanfics I've ever read!
Great job!

damn, that was brutal

I half-expected Jessie to violently sodomize James with a strap-on!!

Funny! Awesome humor story!

Wonderfully hilarious! And it fits the Team Rocket trio so perfectly. OF COURSE they couldn't come up with any type of story with any substance. It makes complete sense that they would tear Ash apart... Although I don't think they would be quite so gruesome. And they've worked so hard to steal Pikachu, I HIGHLY doubt that they'd waste the effort by killing it just for revenge. You did a great job alternating between the three characters and their typed story.

That was the best! It was so Funny!

HAHAHAHAHAHHA aww that was brill!

How ORIGINAL! That had me laughin' and that's just amazing. I love you story... Please make more! You rock

Ah, that was great. :D I could so see Team Rocket doing something like that. And the part with Giovanni was the icing on the cake.

Funny stuff. Funny stuff...

Okay, that was funny. If grilled Pikachu taste anything like grilled rat than it is damn delicious!! Nice to see that little ** finally got what he had coming to him!

Peace. Keep It Sick.

Sickly.

Oh my...how wonderful...HA! I wonder, though, how a grilled Pikachu would really taste. I can't help but thing it would be...kinda fatty. Ah, I shouldn't worry about it, I'm vegeterian. HA!

The complete story is great but James was the better writer.

You can write very great stories. I'm sorry about your review before on Smell the Rain. I never knew about Heaven Scent or whatever.
A little about myself . . .
I love anime! Even though my parents tell me not to read manga cause it has bad words
I like to play basketball
And I am 13

I love this fic. I really do. It's hilarious. ^_^

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! AWESOME STORY! Poor Pikachu...

LOL! Oh wow, that was refreshingly funny and everyone was perfectly in character. Great job!