keep up the good work

I think you should leave it how it is, I really like your story so far, I hope you continue.

aww.. its so sad how things are for her ... :(

Don't rewrite the story! And please get rid of this chapter, for if this is part of the rewritten, then I won't read it. If this is actually part of the story then I'm confused, sorry.

this story is soo awsome!!

oh my god, i love your story. it is amazing. i was kinda worried about reading it because i am not really into the whole angst scene, but i have got to say that i simply love this story. every aspect of it. everything that you put into it adds to it. it is just amazing. I hope that you will keep the previous format... not only do i like the current one but i really want to see what happens and if you have to rewrite it than it will take longer. personally i like reading stories when they are written in 3rd person almost completely with some thoughts interjected, but it is your choice. i really hope that you hurry and update really soon... i really love your story and i hope you don't quit writing... you are extremely talented.

Um, i dont get it? i thought she knew sesshomaru and that she and him got in some fight or something? yeah,...im really confused now. if u wanted to make a new story y didn't you??

?UltimateDemonLover?

Meh likes both, so why don't you make them separate stories? They're not all alike and you can always say it may be like the other story, so have at it! Anything you choose, though, I'll support!
~TheBlackKnight87~

...why is it gonna be re-written?!
...this is good... T_T
But, on the other hand-
I like the current one too.
So... yeah. T_T
But I wish they had a happy ending.

Whoa-
Sesshomaru,quick! IDIOTIC DUDE!*whack*
YES,take away the sharp stuff! O__O

I think you should continue with the original the new version seems kind of bland in comparison. it just doesn't seem to flow that well to me.

I REALLY like this one. Its very cute!

omg, that chapter was great, im glad u went back and told how they met, update again soon please!

u can add these as flashbacks but dont rewrite it cuz thats an excuse to not write more and i love it this way. this story rox. so please dont re-do it

Girl, you can't leave me and everyone else hangin'. I absolutally love this story, my friend told me about it so i just found it. You gotta keep updatin'. Or at least just finish it. Plz update very very soon.

UtimateDemonLover