I super duper like this story. Its very interesting. I especially enjoyed the flashback to their childhood and them being seperated.
Good job. :)

But, there's more right? Right? Please?

The **! Kick his **, Dean!

I loved the end of this chapter. That was just brilliantly Dean.

Oh goody! I've really been wanting to read a good first season fic, and it's vision related- double goody! So glad I stumbled across this... off to the next ch :)

I love love this so far. Sam and Dean's interactions are very true to the characters, both touching and funny at the same time. I hope you get back into writing this soon because it's great.

update! continue plz! i luv this story! so original!

I really, really, really hope you finish this story.

oh... i didn't notice the story was incomplete until reaching the end of chapter six. darn. You had a good story going there. Really good. It reads like it ws fully realised before posting rather than something posted as it was written. You are a very good writer, and I hope you continue.

LOL, love the end of this chapter. Sam, the psychic medium. I bet this will go over REAL WELL.

Wow! That was so exciting! Please continue, this is getting really good and I can almost feel some Limp-Sam coming up with a side of horrified tourists and an awesomely Protective!Dean.

So I've read the rest now, and it's as good as the start except for the tiniest flaw of NOT BEING FINISHED!! You must resume writing this, and other fics. You're too good at it to stop now. Please consider this my official begging letter.

I've never stopped in the middle of the story to review before, but I must say that the best line I've seen in a while is in here:

"Where’s that sensitive Sammy I know and—you know, allow to live?”

And, then, of course, there is:

Standing just off Dean’s left shoulder as was his habit, Sam leaned over to mutter in his ear. “Eww, Dean, just ew.”

I'm off to finish the story and hope you write more of them.

I was lead to your stories because of BEKi of Dorvan's recommendation - which turned out to be more than worthwhile. Considering her talent, not too surprising. I've enjoyed all of your Supernatural stories very much but Grace is fantastic. Funny, achingly funny in some places, and your grasp of the characters and the details of the their relationship is stunning. You make this look easy. How jealous I am.

I can only hope that circumstances allow you to return and enjoy writing.

AWESOME! I love it! You gotta update! PLEASE!