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A
2006-10-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is great too. I was hoping you'd written a sequel to "Silence," and lo and behold you did. Just lovely. :)
generalnothingness
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuse"Wine is bottled poetry" Well so is this story...I love how you write. And I love Whiny!Danny...he cracks me up. Please keep writing, your stories are wonderful.
hogwartsalumni
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseGreat Story! Loved the interaction, loved that they are admitting (to themselves atleast) that there is an attraction and each is fighting it in his own way...
RLBB
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was AWESOME!
I loved it so much, the way you write is amazing, I'll be on the look out for more stuff from you ^.^
NeverMindDream
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuse"Wine is bottled poetry"

That was great...I love how you went back and forth between what they were each thinking...the tension they both have is inspiration in and of itself isn't it?
Sugar-Coated-Goodbyes
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is so good. I can't wait to read more stuff from you.
MedicWarrickLvr
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you went from scene to scene and had so many different aspects of things! I love the wine analogy! That is REALLY good!

love the comment about Danny flirting INCESSANTLY and EXCESSIVLEY, that made me laugh out loud.

Please continue this story! It's fantastic!
achingankle
2006-02-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseWOW! THat was really beautiful,. You have a really nice way with explaining what you mean, I couod just see it all happening.
Adamsgirl
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuse:D i liked that! :D really well written. I hope you write more!
passionate csi
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is very good. I hope that you continue on with it.
Dybdahl
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abusebrilliant
chili-peppers
2006-02-05
ch 1,
abuseahh that was nice!! i loved reading that!1well done your a really good writter!1i hope you can write more D/L storys!
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