I was intreged by another story of yours to read this one.

Well all in all it was writen well, very touching and all. But I think Buzz was OOC. From watching the show I have picked up that he is EXTREAMLY shy around girls. I just don't see Buzz being this 'agressive' in a relationship. I thought the whole 'made love' thing kinda underminded his moral values. I have picked up from TV that he is an old fashined guy who would get marreid first.

But other then that it was good.

Great! Touching! Sweet! Awsome! Interesting! Strange! A New Look!

I'm sorry, but I found this story extremely funny. no offence! It was really cute, the ending was a heartbreaker though.

Whoa... deep (shocked look) But well written and good yes it is

wow,enough to make you cry...

*SOB* *SOB* *SOB* *SOB*

Sequal?

This is a very good story. I couldn't stop reading it :) Novianna "Nov" Supernova

It's Very Good!

Whoa. Almost perfect. That was... almost absolutely perfect. Let's all give it up for Calvin!

-Noah.

Shoot me if I'm wrong, but I sense a taste of your own past in this, yes? no? Oh well, it was still good. You write great story Calvin, keep it up.

Very good insight into Buzz's background. I kind of picture he was probably like that when he was younger. That's probably why he's shy aroud females now. I love it.