 Luc Star 2006-04-06 . chapter 4Ok, I have to tell you. I absolutely hate the Shi’ar. Have you read X-Men the End Series? I hope you have. It’s made each and every one of my worst nightmares about the X-Men come true. Anyways, getting back to the story, it’s all very interesting. However, that part about the Phoenix wanting to be alive and everything kind of flew right over my head. Was hoping you’d be able to explain that to me. It was also good to see the Professor back at the mansion. Anyways, I can’t wait to see what happens. Take care, keep up the great work.
And hey man, check out my story Six Sharp Claws and a Mister Pointy when you get the chance. I think you’ll like it. someone said its better than Guardians at the Gates of Hell. Later dude. |
 ryan merrick 2006-03-01 . chapter 3Kababayan! Nice writing! Good to see a fellow Pinoy write excellent stories! |
 Luc Star 2006-02-27 . chapter 3oh man. when you write a chapter, you write a chapter. this was excellent. god. you really have a knack for putting the new x-men through hell you know. heh. well, i just hope everything works out in the end.
and, i was wondering, how the heck did logan loose an appendage. i mean, indistructable bones. how is it that they can even be torn from him. well, ok, who's khar-lee? i have no clue. an OC i'm guessing. why is he named after you? umm. your name's something like khar-lee? hmm. interesting. anyways, can't wait for the next installment. please update soon. take care. later.
Guardians at the Gates of Hell updated.
New story up. Six Sharp Claws and a Mister Pointy. XMEN AU BTVS Crossover. i write. therefore cool. you go read now. or doza smash. Rar! |
 Luc Star 2006-02-17 . chapter 2Hey PP, how’s it going man? Hopefully great.
This was another excellent chapter. A little slow I’ll admit but necessary none the less as a prelude to what’s going to happen in the next chapter. And am I excited about the next chapter or what. Frankly, I have no idea what the heck just happened there at the end. Was the Phoenix Force hiding within the crust of the earth, you know, spreading itself through out the whole world which is why Emma had a hard time pinpointing it? Too many questions and too little answers. I just hope I’ll be able to keep myself from bombarding you with emails asking for hints about the next chapter. Hehe. And what the heck were those time-broker guys doing? I don’t know much about them I’ll admit but apparently they screw up things more than they actually help in any matter. well, lets see your take on this whole thing. Take care bro. keep up the great work. |
 Jottma 2006-02-11 . chapter 1 WOW! Proudly Pinoy, I don't normally comment on the stories I read on this site, but I absolutely had to do it now.You trully have such a gift with story telling. It is always such a captivating experience to read your tales. I can only imagine how much more more powerful your stories would be with John Cassidy's pencils backing them up. Keep up the great work your doing on this site, because you've got a life long fan out of me. Bravo. |
 Madripoor Rose 2006-02-10 . chapter 1Oh, interesting first chapter. And you know I loved the Kitty and Piotr conversation, and the little Ultimate joke, heh. |
 anhayla1 2006-02-06 . chapter 1You've got me interested, so I'm looking forward to more! I always look for your interweaving plot lines and this one has lots of interesting tidbits. I liked the M.E.T.S. bringing in the mansion from an asylum parallel. Is that from the books or did it come from your diabolic brain? Scary. Keep writing! |
 Dan Ingram 2006-02-06 . chapter 1Hmm, interseting start. Be careful with Phoenix as it's been done to death, but you've proven that you're a skilled writer so I'm staying on. You might wanna address where the other X teams are hiding, though ;) |
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