Great story! I love the differing points of view! The talk of masks in the first chapter is so true and I like the line "Full of passion on a mission, full of joy and laughter when he plays soccer with the children, full of pain when he thinks no one notices. But I noticed it, and I set out to ease that pain." The ending is also really sweet.

*melts into a puddle of goo on the floor* That was incredibly sweet. The last part where Aya whispers "And I you," actually made me teary eyed! I love this pairing! I love this fic! This fic made me love this pairing even more than I did! Great work!

Aw... this is so sweet ::munches into the sweetness even though it's not really THAT sweet::

Anyways. I think it's cute. Nicely brought out and nicely done. Cute also. Nice work! Heck! You RanKen writers are going to make me feel so addicted to the pairing that I want to write one too ::pouts:: but not yet. Too busy with finals. Anyways... cute and nice work. I don't know what to say anymore.

Kawaii! *_* I always thought all this stuff about Ken. _ Very happy to know I'm not the only one.

o_o... hmm... *imagining hell freezing over* interesting.. O.o;;; ok anyway ;; good fic. ;-; i love aya ken pairings ;-; thank you for writing this hehe k yeah um... yeah bye O.o;;

AWwwwwWw!Kawaii ending! I liked it alot!

awwwwwwwwwww... that was realy cool. you have excellent english for someone who doesn't speak it as theirfirst language. hell, your english is probably better than mine... _

This was so good! It's very sweet and beautiful how Aya looks for Ken's love in Ken's eyes. You're very good! I hope I can read more of your work _

Aww...that was so sweet! *sniffle* A bit sad, but all ends well...hey, it's not YoKen, but RanKen's the next best thing, right? Hehe...me and my YoKen tendencies. Anyway, I really liked this fic...*gushes* It's all in the eyes...how so very true. Great job, keep writing! ***oh and p.s. Thanks so much for the reviews for my own fics...just wanted to return the encouragement you've given me...it really helps. Thanks.***

AWWWWWWWWWW! That was so sweet! It needs a sequel. Keep up the good work. Ja ne.

kawaii! kenken and aya are one of my fave relationships! this is really well written. but there is just one piece of creative criticism i think i shoud add. try and watch your grammar, the less errors there are he easier it is to read. there weren't many, it was just a small note. keep it up all the same! _

that was really cute. i liked it. )

One word: KAWAII! I really, really loved this story. I hope you decide to write a lot more. I'll be looking forward to it. Do you have a website that I could visit? Keep up the great work.

so kawaii! i giggled at the end! this was great showing ken's masks! keep writting...you're so good!

Awwww that was really cute! The only suggestion I have is to look at your comma usage . . . there's a few too many. Other than that, it was good!