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| Emilee 2008-04-19 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis story is absolutely magnificent. Well done! You've kept everybody in character so well. And the fluff (yeah it's there) is so subtle and understated. I can't wait for the epilogue. |
| ManonLeChat 2008-03-20 ch 10,  | abuseI'll wait as long as I need to for the epilogue of this strong story... :) |
| May 2008-02-05 ch 10, anon. | abuseThanks for the story. I hope that's not the end, though. What happens afterwards? |
| omasuoniwabanshi 2008-02-04 ch 10, | abuseSmashing ending! Really edge-of-your-seat type stuff. I loved the understated "There was a moment of perfect understanding". The subtlety worked much better than a WAFFy hugfest - which I can't really see Sesshoumaru doing anyway. That silent guardianship of a much younger Inuyasha is about as WAFFy as he gets. I liked how you waited until the very end to have Sesshoumaru acknowledge that Inuyasha wasn't a total loss. Pity the arm didn't grow back, but I guess that's the nature of the spell. Great story! |
| J Luc Pitard 2008-01-30 ch 10, | abuseGreat action, very clear writing in this chapter. I loved the concept of "two minutes and three hundred years ago." The ending of chapter was very strong. |
| Hinatinha 2008-01-30 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. |
| Oya 2008-01-30 ch 10, | abuseErr, I thought that Sesshoumaru can fly or something? Anyway, good to see an update! |
| Thoughts13 2008-01-29 ch 10, | abuseMy Gosh! I am so happy that you posted, I admit, I squeeled at the end of chapter 9. I am so releived that sesshy was okay, and he saved rin. that part when he almost fell over the edge was freaky! for him to have come so far... couldn't he have made that mist thing and floated on it? maybe not. Anyways can't wait for the epilogue! |
| Fenikkusuken 2008-01-29 ch 10, | abuseDo you know how completely, utterly, insanely happy you've made me? Thank you so much for deciding to complete this fic, and in such an exciting and gratifying manner! |
| Dragon77 2008-01-29 ch 10, | abuseThis is a great story please continue writing and post again soon. |
| 2. Acegik1017 2008-01-05 ch 8, | abusewhat..what! rin's dead??!! |
| Chand Aur Roshani 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseIt is sad to hear that you will not be finishing this story. If you ever change your mind, I know tons of people will be very happy. |
| Kavitta 2007-09-15 ch 8, | abuseWONDERFUL story... can't wait for ur update! |
| sueb262 2007-08-16 ch 8, | abusei'm breathless with terror, hope, panic, frustration--excellent chapter! i'm so glad you're updating! |
| Hinatinha 2007-08-16 ch 8, | abuseGood fic. Update soon! |