This story and the one before, are the best reads ive had in a while. i find my self reading my faveriout chapters again and again, you definatly captured my attention with your writing. as well as inspired me to attempt my own fanfiction for the hellboy 'fandom'.

your character is definatly unique with out being to unique if you understand what i mean, and the way you write the characters such as Kroenen, Isla ect is fantastic.

when are you going to update/finish this? im exited to know what happens next.

Mein Gott, this is possibly the BEST series/story I have ever read on this site. Honestly.
The dream, by the way, was intense and excellent. I also love how you put some, scandalous overtones into what Kroenen says. It feels like how he would say it (if that made any sense at all). I'm excited for your next update!

please update! i want to see what erica does to rasputin >D. I also pray that erica ends up with kroenen! Dont get me wrong i like abe but erica and kroenen have more depth and understand eachother better :)

When are you going to issue the next chapter (21) its been months!

OOH, will erica find out about kroenen & ilsa?

One last chance, Ilsa thought, tomorrow Grigory will be back and it’ll be too late. One last chance.

“I think there might be space for you in my room, providing you get lonely. Or need a change of scenery,” Ilsa said suggestively.

She didn’t have to make her invitation twice.

O.O i dunno if i said this already, but rasputin's gonna be **! i cant wait to read his reaction when/if he finds out XD

i absolutely love this, maybe even more than the original movie XD
plz keep it up!
PS- this is just a suggestion, but could u possibly make kroenen get back his original face (like his eyelids and lips)? its just a little creepy reading about ericaxkroenen when he's like that... >.> but otherwise im a fan of this and its prequel!

"ERICA…FISH THING…EMOTIONS…I…DAMN THEM ALL AND MYSELF!"
lololol he almost fell offa the roof!
ah a jealous kroenen is a hilarious kroenen

AH! It took me FOREVER to read this. I read half when you first updated and then i forgot about it. But now i'm good. I love this story; please update soon...Abe/Erica forever! Sorry kronen, i like you but abe is better. *shrugs and then hugs abe*

"And, God help her, she was going to kick Rasputin’s sorry ** back into his grave and make sure he stayed there." LOL! I love that line. :)

I adored the chapter. I can't wait 4 the next chap.

Wonderful Wonderful! I positively love you and this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome, awesome ,awesome! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Keeper-of-the-Cheese

I'm so happy you updated! ^_^

Please, PLEASE, tell me that Erica and Karl are gonna end up together. He needs lots and lots of love ~ cuz he's so super!
This story of yours is planned out truly well. I wish this happened in the movie. That would've been awesome! 8D

This is going to get a happy ending...right? I hope so. I want Karl to have his happy ending with Erica.

Wow, can you tell I'm obsessed or what?

Anyhow, this was fantastic! Can't wait to see how it ends.

This chapter was well worth the wait. (m alliteration) Your writing had improved dramatically. Your writing has always been riveting, but this chapter is by far the best I've seen from you. The flow was good and the transitions were smooth and well placed. The dialogue was deliciously witty and deep. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

Honestly, reading this had made me want to return to my old Hellboy fanfic. I still work on it from time to time, but I've taken a break to work in other fandoms. Still, beautiflly done chapter, serious cudos.

~DCR

Wow. I waited 4 months for this. It was worth it. My only suggestion: continue. An R-rated bit wouldn't be so bad either ;)

But anyway. This story amazes me.