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| Kitty Invictus 2007-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseabsolutely awe inspireing. This story was so well done that i can barely think what to write in response. there is no way to voice how great this was. congrats |
| Isabellec 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseGod DAMN, this is intense! |
| angry penguin 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. |
| Speakfire 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseDepressing yet utterly believable. A very very good story |
| Ammonite 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseOh my, you did it again. When I saw your name as the author of this story, I had to read it, knowing it would be far from typical. I just let out a deep breath. Have to get myself together here. This confirms why you are on my Favorite Authors list. |
| Tracyj23 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. Immensely sad journey into Bill Adama's soul there, and Kara and Lee's too. I found it quite believable (if I hadn't seen RS 1 & 2 already I might think it actually would happen). The story really pulls you in and makes you feel what the characters feel. Nicely done. |
| yannik 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseTell me how do you do it? I mean the writing, the style. It's so good it had me immersed in the story so deep, I was late with my shopping, didn't make dinner on time, and... oh, well... ;) You're a magnificent writer, that's what I want to say. The only thing that bugged me in this story, was the moment when Lee gives Kara his note. Logically - and from what they both say - they are BOTH about to die. So how come she takes the note, without even thinking how nonsense is that? Or getting some foreshadowing on what Lee is planning to do? This moment - imo - needed one more polish. Appart from that - too dark and pessimistic for me to really _enjoy_ it - but incredibly well written story. |
| Airam4u 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseDamn that was good! Damn near brought tears to my eyes! The note he wrote and Adama's last thoughts were absolutely perfect! Good job! |
| annpo 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI felt every word of that. Beautifully written. Thanks for a great story. ps. quick nitpick: "would indeed surely insight an uproar" That isn't INSIGHT you're wanting there, it's INCITE. ...and thanks again for a terrific read. |
| starbuck042786 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseDear Lord thats dark and depressing. But its so good though! I like it |
| Coucher de Soleil 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseHi there, Oh my... This was so painful, but very well done. Thanks for posting. |