crack fic. totally random

Haha soo true!

I loved this fic, but I liked the thirth chapter better. Everything you describe is soo funny.

Hahah, I can see why people like this story now! And my favorite little chapter is forty-one, the author's profile.

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO FUNNY XDDDDD

You're awesome, you know that? You really are. X3 The very idea of even writing this fic was just...genius. Never even thought about it myself. XD AND not to mention the fact that each and every one of your chapters were so spot-on and accurate that it amused me a lot. XD

As for my favorite chapter...well, they're all so good, it's so hard for me to choose. However...I think I'd go with the SasuNaru parody on this one. XD

*sighs* Phew...now that made MY day. :D Thanks for the great read! w

Regards,

.::.*Kitsune Shadow*.::.

I love it! :3 Excellent story!

Seriously, this is HILARIOUS! XD

haha, brilliant! XD

Okay, I seriously have to tell you this- you're work is amazing! It's hilarious, enough said XD

OH. MY. GOD. XD This is BEYOND f'amazing! I laughed so hard, my gut aches like hell... But, seriously, I love this! XD

I believe you just decimated my faith in the world of fanfics! XD

Fanfics wud never be the same again! (unless I come across real good ones! :P)

So many, many things in this irritate me, too! I'd say (if I have to pick just one), that Chapter 10 would be my favorite. The OOC-ness. Itachi giving out ice cream, even though Sasuke doesn't like sweets, the yaoi, etc.

I'd written a bad fan fic collection a some months ago but in a different format. Now your points have made me aware that my peeves were less inclusive that I realized.

Great summation of cliches! :)

This should be read by all authors, new and old, before posting their next chapter. It would help us all!

I feel so pathetic now...

Teme

Since at the end you wanted nominations for the favourite one? (though I'm reviewing much later on in this stories life-I'm still going to nominate one).

Forty-nine is the best! I knew all the introducing characters before you described them, and I find this to be the most annoying to read (as a reader). As much as I love FMA I do not want it intersecting with Naruto...totally different times and universes. The only one I don't mind much is Harry Potter mixed with Naruto and that is very rare.

Overal an amazing job, I was expecting something to pop up about Mpreg but I loved it nonetheless. I hope you don't mind, but up on my profile right now I have a list of pet peeves I hate about some writers and you covered almost all of them. I was thinking of adding a link to this story because you nailed most of my pet peeves (plus everyone should read this, sadly a lot of writers write like that). Would you mind if I did? If you do I will take it down.

5 imaginary stars!

Best laugh I had in a while. This should be a rulebook or something.

Well I couldn't bring myself to actually read this fic but I did get a kick out of reading all the different titles of the chapters, though I did speed read tidbits from all of them.

I did smile at what I read, and agree with you on many points, but this fic came off as trying too hard to be funny. Though it was well needed in the fanfiction world, and I liked it. And it is easy to point out fallacies in writing but it is crazy hard to get yourself out of that rut, too. Especially considering we are posting on FF.net for a reason, and don't have our own best selling series.

But I did enjoy what I did read...for the most part.