I like this look at the "other side" of Paradigm. The dialog seems very natural. Great job!

Its different and interesting. I like it.

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Nice and sweet story that deals with the normal people that live in that city. It is nice and refreshing to read something like this, and stories like this are called expermental types. I like the fact that the average worker make the Deuce winked at him.

This was a nice refreshment from all of the Roger/Dorothy fics (don't get me wrong, I love them all!). I especially loved that part with the Megadeuce winking at that poor guy. Keep up the good work!

Very NICE! :) And perspective of a normal citizen! I've always wanted to either write one of those, or read one! _ I'm sure glad there was one written, because this story is great! :)