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| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 2,  | abuseYour vivian seems to trusting too fast. I would think that after the Aiden thing she wouldn't even be going to school. Also, I thought they were moving to Vermont. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI'm really sorry, but it sounds like a self insert. I mean, I can already see where this is going because I've read a few other like this. Is something going to happen to make this story unique? Like a super unheard of plot twist? That would work. |
| TaylorAlexandra 2008-05-11 ch 9, | abusei loved it ;] update ? |
| Superdani 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseUPDATE MAKES ME HAPPY! Now I'd like to see more of Ulf and Alyssa. please? |
| Superdani 2008-05-06 ch 8, | abuseYAY THANKS FOR UPDATING! I though you give up on this story. |
| nicole317 2008-05-02 ch 9, | abuseYaY! after waiting in anticipation for what seemed would never come (lol ya i'm a lil dramatic) you've updated! love it and can't wait for the rest! |
| cristalluvsvampires 2008-04-26 ch 7, | abusereview soon please this is asume |
| nicole317 2008-04-23 ch 7, | abusei LOVE your story soo much! it's the best story i've read of all the blood and chocolate fanfic, and i'm DYING for the next chapters! i see u haven't updated in awhile, any chance it will be soon plez lol ^_^ |
| princesscharmed2008 2008-01-21 ch 7, | abusei like the idea of your story. i think however if you made your pages more like this one with every dialouge being on a separate paragraph and the paragraphs smaller more people might want to read it. it looks to overwhelming with the big paragraphs. especaially for people lik me who like to scan the story before reading it to see if they like it. |
| Superdani 2007-12-10 ch 7, | abuseOh man I love your story! PLEASE update soon! |
| Mrs. Dom Masbolle 2007-03-07 ch 5, | abusethis is good, but i want gabe and viv fluff, not fights!! please update soon! |
| hpofan15 2006-11-07 ch 5, | abusethis story is one of the best ive ever read! Plz update soon! |
| silver.shadow.23 2006-09-01 ch 5, | abusePretty good...only complaint I have (& this is a strange one) is the paragraph length. It was kind of hard to understand who was talking. But other then that, really good story line and update soon! .silver. |
| Risi-Chan 2006-08-08 ch 5, | abusenice. please update soon!! |
| update :P 2006-08-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseupdate |