aww... that's nice. ^^

So... sad!! Y_Y

nice name change, and great story =)

sounds cool!...hope the brother becomes unstoned soon.

really good! happy now? i reviewed gosh ur so annoying! rofl jkign well u r many times. and dont even think of saying ull throw me a kunai! cuz my punch hurts u ahrd right? well watch ur abck at school@!

Short and sweet. This was great.

Hey cool story its very dramatic please make more chapters k? im watching you 0.0... lol

that was beautiful!! Short, sweet, and to the heartbreaking point just like this review. Some spelling errors but nothing too big. A nice little monologue, one which I can actually imagine Ed saying.