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| bookthehobbit 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseaww... that's nice. ^^ |
| blackXheart 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseSo... sad!! Y_Y |
| KonohaShinobi 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abusenice name change, and great story =) |
| stargirl57 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusesounds cool!...hope the brother becomes unstoned soon. |
| zenon27 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abusereally good! happy now? i reviewed gosh ur so annoying! rofl jkign well u r many times. and dont even think of saying ull throw me a kunai! cuz my punch hurts u ahrd right? well watch ur abck at school@! |
| Kaori-chan92 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. This was great. |
| The Sakura Alchemist 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseHey cool story its very dramatic please make more chapters k? im watching you 0.0... lol |
| STUPIDHUMANZZ 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful!! Short, sweet, and to the heartbreaking point just like this review. Some spelling errors but nothing too big. A nice little monologue, one which I can actually imagine Ed saying. |