 thebookhobbit 2007-02-02 . chapter 1aww... that's nice. ^^ |
 blackXheart 2006-04-15 . chapter 1So... sad!! Y_Y |
 KonohaShinobi 2006-02-09 . chapter 1nice name change, and great story =) |
 stargirl57 2006-02-08 . chapter 1sounds cool!...hope the brother becomes unstoned soon. |
 zenon27 2006-02-08 . chapter 1really good! happy now? i reviewed gosh ur so annoying! rofl jkign well u r many times. and dont even think of saying ull throw me a kunai! cuz my punch hurts u ahrd right? well watch ur abck at school@! |
 Kaori-chan92 2006-02-06 . chapter 1Short and sweet. This was great. |
 The Sakura Alchemist 2006-02-06 . chapter 1Hey cool story its very dramatic please make more chapters k? im watching you 0.0... lol |
 STUPIDHUMANZZ 2006-02-05 . chapter 1that was beautiful!! Short, sweet, and to the heartbreaking point just like this review. Some spelling errors but nothing too big. A nice little monologue, one which I can actually imagine Ed saying. |