I almost wet myself I laughed so hard. I love you. You're awesome.

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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Gawd, that's hilarious!

This has got to be the most HILARIOUS thing I have ever read on here! I love the way you squeezed in every conceivable Mary Sue cliche and how the judge reacted to them. Too bad we can't do that to characters when we're reading them. Way to go!! Keep up the good work!

xD haha, lovely! I loved this fic! Sure does a good job at poking fun at and bashing Sues. xD Two thumbs up, yo. b(^-^)b

(Ah crap another fangirl hell spawn and Lil Sue. xD haha, priceless)

Hahahaha! I hate to even think what kind of stories areout there that made you write this. Are you exagerating a little or do people really write crap like that?
I'm actually very worried now that my own character is a little Sueish. I must do editing. Keep up the funny writing!

Love it!! HAHA!

Wow, that was amazing! Keep writing, i beg of you! By the way, have you read my story for Hellboy fanfiction? It's called Thelodus. I've been wondering if my character is a Mary Sue and now i'm wondering if you'd please maybe read it and tell me if she is? If she is, i'd actually be happy if you made fun of her...I hope my character's not Mary Sue though. Keep writing!
H. Valentine

Absolutely brilliant. You incorporated everything I love. I might seem like a big idiot, but what the hell does Mary Sue mean in fanfic terms?

That rocked. A lot.

kekeke. Nice. Loved the bit with Ron.

Oh God, you killed me! You killed me with laughter! This was very awesome.

How much did I enjoy this story? I just added it to my Favorites list, that's how much! (Partly so I can find it again easier, next time I need to point out to someone how Mary Sue-ish their main character is.)

"The voice was delicate, weak in nature, like the trickle of a stream, like the soft cry of a baby robin, like the mew of a kitten, gently falling out of her blood red lips and pearly white teeth. Her eyes became teary, resembling even more pools, pools so beautiful that one could be drawn in and…

“Goddammit, I said enough with that woman!”

Thank you, THANK YOU!!

Bravo! It's so refreshing to read a worthy Sue parody. I truly enjoyed this story and your writing skills are rather good. Well done.

Oh my god that was so fantastic
the sack of potatoes with a face drawn on was the funniest thing ever!

(laughs) Chuck Norris... I don't really know who he is, but I like the Chuck Norris jokes. Sprinkles... God, I almost peed myself laughing.