You write really intriguing stories.

I'll admit to just about anyone that I am quite the sap, esp when it comes to damn cute angst ridden boys, so quite a few heart-strings (again might I add) were plucked here, expertly I might add.

Can I just ask... have you made some sort of deal with a demon for your writing skills 'cos they're just... paranormal : )

Wonderful insight into the boys dynamics... again. Esp the 'You're not my Sam.'

Sigh

I am completely in awe of your writing. This story is so beautifully conceived and told and I loved every word of it. I do hope you resume writing Supernatural!

Another good one. Thanks! Am really loving the whole Dean ripped soul container line. Woot!

Good Lord! This was amazing. I found you purely by accident and what a LOVELY discovery. Very rarely am I at a loss for words. My reviews tend to babble at times, especially when I really enjoy a story. I was stone cold speechless after reading 'Fools.' I feel bad about not leaving a review for that - but I quite literally was just in awe. You did such an amazingly, awesome job. The level of talent in this fandom never ceases to amaze me. You are one of the best.

The intricacies of the emotions that you explore have just floored me. Some authors touch on certain or specific emotions - I think you covered them all. And you did it so damn well. I stayed up til 1 am reading this last night. Had to work this morning -but screw it. I'll take a nap later :)

I found this sequel to be totally entrancing and I just loved the originality of the premise. Dean's soul shining...and how it affected him and even moreso, those around him. The characterizations were I think as close to that of the actual show as i've yet to come across. What a way to have Sam privy to Dean's innermost thoughts - and to have Dean be unaware of it at the same time. Each time Dean spoke something he thought he was only thinking was so powerful. I felt as sucker punched in the gut as Sam in those moments. What you had him say...and the way he said it - powerful. Loved how Sam was so torn about it all. He loved the glimpse of his brother but felt guilty about it because Dean had no knowledge or control over it. Your observations of Dean through Sam and others was a definate highlight of the fic - as was all the witty banter back and forth. There are too many bits and one liners to note - but off the top of my head Dean taking the motel pillows and his reasoning as to why is only one of the many instances as to why I so enjoyed this. And the bit about geological closeness and Sam wondering if he'd ever loved Dean more than he did at that moment...*sigh* good stuff! Excellent writing. Saving this to Faves for sure. I'm looking forward the the 3rd and final installment...hopefully today or tomorrow.

--shan

Fabulous story. I loved Dean unintentionally revealing himself, the things he said were so devestatingly honest. I think I was as selfishly disappointed as Sam when Dean was whole again, of course I wanted him to be better and back to himself, but I miss those unexpected bursts of thought.

Stunning, beautiful, absolutely mind blowing.

I'm normally so wordy with my reviews but I don't have anything left to say. I seem to have lost my jaw when it dropped...

The entire trilogy was spectacular.

Cheers,
Sera

I really enjoyed this story, I loved that Dean's soul was shining through and alowed Sammy glimpses of the real Dean. It was so sweet that Sammy ended up stitching together his brother's soul. Beautiful story!

I'm really enjoying your writing. I was particularly struck by Sam's sympathy with the thing. Nice.

Oh no! Something is tracking Dean? I hope it isn't evil, but what are the chances of that? Not good, I know. I just hope Sam's psychic powers kick in and protect them this time. Let's see some violent telekinesis or something, Sammy! Power up, man!! LOL... Well, I guess there is only one way to find out... (eagerly clicking on next story)...

God... I don't understand why Sam said Jess when he really heard Dean... I mean, it's those kind of denials that have Dean all twisted up with fear of abandonment. He should have told his brother he heard him out there... (sigh) I feel bad for Dean, Sam tries to be there for his brother, they are seperate people, but if he were just to admit his connection to his brother, Dean wouldn't hold on so tight to him. He'd be able to trust Sam would always come back and he'd loosen up a bit. At least, that's what I think...

I just found your stories and I wanted to leave a review at the end of them to tell you how much I appreciate the skill in your writing and the stories themselves, but I can't make it all the way through this one without saying something.

This story is completely captivating and enchanting. I am fascinated with the portrayal of the boys' connection. You make it visible and tangible and completely powerful. I love it. Most people translate powerful bonds into sex as the physical representation, but the most powerful connections are platonic. They're just harder to explore, but you solved that problem beautifully. You show more with dialogue and a breif touch than most writers can acomplish.

Your work is awsome. That's all I can say. The combination of your imagination and skill is a reader's dream come true. Thank you so very very much for posting and writing. I can't wait to read more. You'll definately hear from me again!

You are truly a gifted writer in every possible way. I hope you are aware of your talent and continue to make use of it.

Another awesome story. Enjoyed every word. The idea of Dean being open like that was just fantastic.

And there's a follow up to this too. Yay! Something good to read tomorrow ^_^

Keep up the awesome writing!

GN

Well, well, what an interesting story. The last sentence - does that tell us that we should be looking for another sequel? Your writing in its expressive style, is very different - very deep. I had to re-read several passages to make sure that I wasn't missing something. I liked the way you got into the boys' heads - those inner emotions that they don't want to reveal. Sometimes, though, I felt that the story (and true meaning) was difficult to follow - thus the re-reading. I don't mind that, but it may turn some readers off.

You've done a good job at writing the boys' emotions in a way that makes them believable, so it was definitely worth the read. I'll continue to follow your work. Give us the sequel that I think you set up - I'll be looking forward to it. Good writing. Keep it up.