Aww, i really like this.. a fic where Cloud takes in all three brothers. Its so sweet! Please update!!

o0.0...update soon^_~ i really like this story, its...exciting^_^

I really like the way you made the trio have a second chance, please hurry and do the next chapter soon.

Who are the packages from?

I really like this story, you should keep it up!! I think its kind'a cute the way the three protect eachother, and that humor is also a good element in this story. You have a unique way of writting, and I feel that you are using it well. like I said before, Keep It Up!! :)

i like. i like! i really hope you keep this fic going.

well i think its great, i hope you keep writeing it cause i really wanna know what hapens.but i think the way the brothers comfert each other is...a little wierd.unless u wante it that way.at the same time it shows us how close and open they are to each other.

I like this. I think the brothers are all well written. There are bits of humor here and there, but it's also serious. I wish I remembered more Japanese from high school so I didn't get tripped up every now and then and have to stop and think 'What did *that* mean again?' or scroll up to the top of the page to find out. XD
Loz at the Gold Saucer--the possibilities are endless. For a while now I've thought that it would be just AWESOME to have him there, for whatever reason.

I like, but I'd like more for you to continue soon ^_~.
(Maybe some LozxTifa too?) Please do take care and I'll be waiting to see how the rest of the story goes!

nice story. I hope you write more

I really love this so far, and I think it has amazing potential, please keep writing. I plan to keep watch...

Hey, that is cool! Yazoo is awesome! It is a little confusing sometimes, maybe I'm just too sleepy. By the way, I'm learning Japanese online and noticed that you are typing Ka-san for mother. According to my lessons, that is incorrect. It should be written "okaasan". I guess the "o" is silent. Just thought I'd point that out. ^_^ Good story, though!

She fed them Kool-aid? It's the only 'blue' thing I can think of that can be really sweet. ^^ Don't worry Yazoo, there are sour flavors too!

cool story, keep it up.

-stabs you with a pointy rock- Hey, man! You should keep writing on this, man! And, like, update, man! ^^
Yoroshiku, hopefully.

I liked it! I'm glad Kadaj is back and that telapathic talking between the 'brothers'. I hope you have some scenes with the kids and Kadaj. Sayonara.