this is a really nice story, i don't mind any mistakes at all. i would read your spanish stuff... but... i kind of stink at reading it right now. i only started learning in the begining of the school year. just translating your profile was hard for me, but i will but your profile on my favorites list and when i learn more spanish i will try again to read them, ok? ^_^

thank you for the review before for "A Sick Day" I can understand if you think i am insane, my friends think so too ^_^

~Selina

Aww... sis, què tendre...
T'escriuré en català, ok? No tinc tanta soltura escribint en anglès com tu, per bé que sí que he entès el teu fic =)
Mol tendre u_u pero crec que realment el Yuki sí que veu la Tooru una mica més com la mare que com una noia x estimar (ja te a l'altra pesada XD), pero weno, krek k això ho has tret de la teva pròpia collita eh? =P
Pos eso, mol maco, a veure quan fas un Kyoru més directe =P O potser es demanar massa? juju.

Xitos! I que te vagi mube tot!*

EK! I have a dedication...ME!

I'm blushing red 'til it hurts, Kari! I LOVE your story! It does help me to cope with that chapter you mentioned. Hehe, it's been a while since I've read it...a year or so ago. And you're right, everything is there for a reason. At least, I'll hope for that!

Awesome, fantastic...just plain superb. I like how you convey the heart of the matter through your words. It gives the reader an inside seat in the character's emotions. You do it so well with your other fics, I'm so happy you managed to do it for a Furuba fic.

Your English is fine...I'm rather bad with my grammar & English is my native tongue, so don't fret the small stuff. Your story was great, & I enjoyed it so much!

Keep up with your other fics! I hope you'll like my newest fic released. It's just a one-shot, but cute! Take care, Kari!

Me ha gustado mucho, una buena visión de lo que podría sentir Yuki ^_^ Desde el principio soy fan del Tohru/Yuki, pero reconozco que con Yuki tampoco habría estado mal :P

Firstly, this is wonderfully written and very touching. I am truly impressed.

Aside from that, your English skills are very good (better than some natives); therefore, do not worry too much about that.

Keep up the great work.