this is really good

Ew...no offence, but this is horrible.

Horrible! I hate it. Don't continue. BITCH

Sorry. I'm not going to be nice. This sucks. It's completely...bland. Where's the storyline?

I decided o reread this story only cause i heart you (and I'm in it) I am busy thinking about hottie Logan and his gotee! And his poor little broken body. I'm also thinkin bout Lor and Chris! I'm thrilled!

luv, your bff,

Haley