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akifan98
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
lol!
Love's Labour's Won
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
That's adorable! I love it!
Marie
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
This was a really good one-shot. I have to say I really liked the different perspective on Akito and Yuki's childhood relationship. I think that way too!
sabrinaw
2008-01-23 . chapter 1
lmao! 'he's fun to tease' Akito can be so mean. ^^' I really wish there were more stories like these...^^; they're cute.
Murkydew
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
I do believe I was in hysterics when I read this XD omg, I feel so sorry for Akira ~ the talk that no parent wishes to have with their children (let along their child whose name happens to be Akito :p)

Metallic Ghost
2006-06-05 . chapter 1
Ah, that was so cute~! ^_^

The memory of the bath was absolutely hilarious. I must say I laughed for a good long while! Another great story, with Akito portayed in a different light. You write her very well.

Looking forward to reading more from you, definitely!
AnnaMaria15
2006-05-21 . chapter 1
OMG, that was the SWEETEST thing I've read! I LOVE IT! You're definetly my newest fav writer, I cant wait to go read your other stories ^^
I love Akito and Yuki's fics, they're the best! And even more when they're children! So cute!
Keep up the good work!
-Anna

"I'm GOD, why don't I have one of THOSE?!" jajaja, akito is so innocent in here, ^^ and YUKI! ^^
bleedingkansas
2006-03-11 . chapter 1
AHH! ^/^ That was so CUTE! I was giggling the whole time! You write the sweetest stories, do you know that? I swear on the holy Bible that I will make your presence known all across the internet! Your stories definitely deserve more attention. I just finished reading The Game of Memory. I was going to review it would probably wind up ten-fold longer than usual, so I promise I will review it later!

I've only read up to volume 12 so I don't know much about Akira; I've only seen one picture of him before. I loved the idea you used to which wound uo with Yuki in hospital bed. I'm planning on writing a fic that involves a certain rat getting chased around by a wild cat... ;) Anyhoo, this was undoubtedly one of the sweetest Furuba fics I've ever read. Its not every day I come across a fic involving Akito and Yuki's early childhood, much less with Akira. My little cousin Claire had a similar conversation with my aunt and uncle and my parents when she and my little brother took a bath together WAY back six or seven years ago.

On another note, you are now on my favorite author's list. I hope you come out with new fics soon!

~*Black-Meteora*~
SoranoHikari
2006-02-06 . chapter 1
Hey it is just me MiakaRyo at I go by SoranoHikari here. I just reviewed at but I thought it would not hurt to say something here because it never hurts to have lots of reviews. I truly do love this story and I hope that you write more about Akito and Yuki as children. It is nice to see a side of Akito that is truly happy. Also I have a livejournal page under the name MiakaHikari and the link is in my profile. I wish that you always have fun in your writings. SR
Koshi Sekisen
2006-02-06 . chapter 1
¡Ahahahahahahahaha!
Oh my god! That was *hilarious*! You cannot believed how much I laughed... that was so *sweet*! The *thing*! xDD Poor, poor Yuki, he things he's weird for having *it*... geez... amazing xDD
Akito's so kawaii when she's chibi x3 and Yuki-kun as well, though I wonder if you'll ever mention Haru in their childhood as well? Just curiosity.
Anyway, this is a *really sweet* fic... really adorable.
I'm going to re-read the parts I forgot of SOS to make sure I can follow the storyline when it comes to... I can't wait!
Anyway, I updated my own Furuba fic! It's a One-shot Yukiru/Kyouru... I'd like you to have a look at it. I dedicated it to you ^^-
Well, I hope you keep on writing, you have all my suport!
Kari Ishikawa
PS: Let's build a religious sect where Yuki's God! xD jk, jk
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