That was very well written. I love how you compared Kadaj. Sephiroth to a phoenix/firebird. It fits Sephiroth because he seems to keep coming back. Brilliant job.

This is really good. I love that you compared Kadaj to a phoenix. Very nice job.

Lawl, I was hoping for a Rufus rape xD But this is just as good, except w/o teh sex! Thnx, Kadaj is the best, I love Rufus to bits!

That isw awesome! You captured each of the characters perfectly!! Except Loz... But Loz doesn't really have much of a personlaity, does he? Or, he does, but... Oh, whatever. Great fic!

You have a way with words, and I love it!

Nicely done - you captured Rufus very well, and I loved the whole idea of Rufus being a pawn. And Yazoo ^_^ - he's cool.