Loved this one! Very nice brother fic :)

I enjoyed how gentle & caring Don is in this story. Good job; in fact, I think I'll add it to my favorites. :)

Aw, such loveliness!;)

Excellent story. Thanks, Beth

I LOVE this story! You did such an awesome job with it. It's so good! Keep it up!

omg! that was so touching! (*blinks back tears*) i loved all of it and couldn't imagine how it could get any better!:):):)

[sigh] I love this story. I could wish it was just a tad bit longer before Charlie realizes Don's alive (I know, I'm evil), but hey, it's a lovely piece. Characterizations on target, plot very believable, and a nice Eppes moment at the end. Who could ask for more? [big grin] Becky

good story.

This was sweet. But when Charlie hugged Don's bruised ribs, all I could think was ouch, ouch, ouch!

loved every word!

wow. I was on the edge of my seet during the flashback. my only comment is that maybe you should put what happened to larry in. it just seemed a little random that he was in there. good story though.

awesome :)

Awesome! I loved this fic! So going in my binder!

You really know how to put the reader into the situation. I always feel like i'm watching from the sidelines instead of reading a story

As always this is excellent!

Ohh, most excellent. I do love these wonderful one

shot stories that are so packed with emotion.

Good job! Got another one in you? I'll be there

to read every time.