aw *giggles* squee! that's exactly how it would happen, poor Kyo! great job!

Short, but very sweet. Kyo's lines were really true to his character, although the last line made me sad... But this was a really nice piece. Great job!

I really love this story! It's so kawaii!
Thanx!

aw, so cute and really well written ^^

YEEK! It's so cute! >.< That's my favorite fruits basket pairing.

Lovely!

Aww! So cute!
x Cazzy x

OH! This is so kawii! I love it so much!!

AW!

CUTE!
so lovey dovey!
i love it!!

Hey!
That was really cute. I liked it a lot. -nods- Really.

it was very well writen. it would be even better if you added at least a lil more at the begining. but it was still awsome.

rock on and keep writing!

This is a very nicely written and enjoyable one-shot. In spite of its length, it manages to convey the emotions well and does not seem to be too rushed.

Firstly, the characters are very much in character and the circumstances leading up to that kiss are believable. Kyo rehearsing his lines is very sweet, befitting his rather shy attitude towards love.

Nice job.

:O That was honesty EXTREMELY cute. ^.^ I liked it!!

Hm... I'd give it about a 8/10... It is a bit short, and not very descripitive, but I still love it!! It is so sweet!!