Soldiers died-violently, uselessly, and Ben had never stopped being a soldier.

This hit home. Hard.

I know this review is late, but I just found this story and it was fantastic! Great work! It's going on my favorites list. I would quote certain lines back to you, but it'd be like quoting almost the entire story. It was that good.

Beautiful.

beautifully written. I just came across this today. The show had a lot of dynamics on Zack's relationship with the women/sisters of his unit, but there wasn't much about his brothers. This was a fascinating and haunting look into what Zack and Ben's relatioinship would be like.

great work.

Mystic

Stunning ficlet. I loved it, and I look forward to whatever other masterpieces you come up with. This was an insightful look into their lives and into their personalities. Well done.

Wonderful look at Zach and Ben's relationship and how Zach would have felt about Ben's actions.

So sad!

Very well-written as usual, papillon...I luv Zack, I can see how he relates to Ben as a soldier...hmm..interesting fic...:)