 Toxo 2008-07-18 . chapter 6Oh-oh-oh! I absolutely love this story! I love Sheik's little hobby and his amusing personality. I think you made a good job, especially with Link (like for example, him not knowing anything about women, politics etc.). I'm very interested in the story and I really hope you'd somehow find the will and inspiration to continue this (even though it's been, what, 2 years). *cough*
There are few errors I'd like to point out, though. Isn't it Kakariko village instead of Kakoriko? :P And Kokiri instead of Kokori.
Minor problems aside, I think this fic is pure brilliance and it'd be sad if you couldn't finish it. :( |
 sock monkeys 2007-10-27 . chapter 6love it. the last chapter was my favorite. I like the idea of Link not knowing what a relationship is. update soon please! |
 Galaxya 2006-09-01 . chapter 6After reading Your Nauto storry and enjoying it so much, I have decided to read all of your stories. This being the first "Zelda" storie I have ever read, I cant judje it by its storie line (as I dont know much about zelda) But I can say that it is simply a great storie so far. I look forward to readinng more of your work.
Galaxya |
 Sheik's twin 2006-08-02 . chapter 6I love this story! please update soon! |
 horsie890 2006-07-24 . chapter 6I love this! Link is so clueless, and rightfully so. Hooray! |
 ME;) 2006-07-23 . chapter 6 I really like your story but I have a question, will there be fluff soon? Please say yes! Anywho great story! |
 TheGoddessKnight 2006-07-23 . chapter 6UPDATE! Seriously cause its awesome. Can't wait to see how 'noble' is this prince. Anyways, love how you made Link naive in love. Doubt Link from OoT really knew love between him and another. |
 C. Shannon 2006-07-22 . chapter 6 I had almost thought you had abandoned this story, it´s a relief to see that´s not the case.
You really have a talent for dialogue, in case I haven´t mentioned that. The title for the next chapter sounds promising. I´ll keep checking for updates. |
 Guybrush007 2006-07-21 . chapter 6Excellent writing. Link's character interests me; smart, but there are things which are unknown to him, a realisic possibilty due to Kokiri upbringing.
To dumb that down, great job! Keep Going! I wait as long as I need to for updates! |
 Zach 2006-07-21 . chapter 6 NO! Chapter 6 ended! Now I have to wait for Chapter eight D: |
 Zach 2006-07-21 . chapter 5 And two halves of a body just lays there D: ?!? |
 Otakurec.37 2006-07-20 . chapter 6Thank God you finally updated! I was starting to lose a little hope in you. But thankfully that was nothing. This was absolutely wonderful! Please update again soon and stop making me suffer al the long waits. |
 DiRTy-LaRrY 2006-07-19 . chapter 6I'm very sorry, even though this was good, I need to correct one thing. Chainmail can't keep arrows off the body. The chains are forced through, and the arrow head will stab through the mail, however, chainmail is practically invulnerable to slashes. Only plate armor has a chance of stopping arrows (chainmail was used because it was lighter and more flexible than plate mail...) sorry! |
 JadedXParade 2006-07-04 . chapter 5I really like your story. It's very good and intersting. Are Link and Zelda getting together anytime soon? Cuz that would rock. Anyway, I'll check back later to see if you have updated. Please update soon! |
 lildaemon 2006-06-07 . chapter 5hahaha... great story so far! i really like how you've portrayed the characters... and link's connections do spread far across hyrule, hm? can't wait for the next chapter... seems like things are starting to roll! |