Very good story, can't wait to see where this goes.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter, looks bad for the home team.

gunny

Good job Kat, sorry I didn't read sooner.
But now I can read your sequel!

-Tremble Wolf

NO! Finished already? I want to know more!

Very well done. I can't wait to see how Randi does in the new unit.

Ah, the mounting angst. Very good, very good indeed. I'm anxious to see how Maro defends his decision in front of Aari. Letting Randi go without covering for himself is somewhat strange to me, but I will hold that comment until I read the next chapter.

Nice one!
I always knew that Randi was a Clanner, but I admire your patience to not rush to reveal Randi's secret. I also like how you reveal Randi's secret at the very end of Ch.7. BattleTech / Mechwarrior stories are so much better with human drama.

Interesting.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Don't look good for the home team.

gunny

Interesting.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny