This wasn't too bad. I liked it. You had a very good idea for the plot and the way the story flowed, but you had a teeny tiny problem with run-on sentences. Good job though. Can't wait to see more.

LOLOLOLOL

door was stuck, hehehe

What a perfect ending, this is great!

wo ai ni...

melt...

You're the best! Your fics are so nice and WAFFy. I wish to see you write more soon!

...reis door was stuck lol Us people and our dirty minds that was good very orignal I liked it.

lol, i like that. . It's funny.

That was so0o0o0o00o0o0o0o0o0o0o amazing! i loved it! excellent story _ i swaer i was gunna cry near the end, i'm gunna read the sequel, Damn u know this is the first time i actually hate Tala in a story :P it a mirical! great job, on n i'm still working on the forth chapter of my story :D buh-bye for now ;)

that was nice at the end. and your right people do have sick minds. plz. make another story.

Pretty good story! Like it. Tala's a asshole and Catalina is a b*. which is scary, cause usually i read fics and Tala is always like Kai's best friend. Yes, am selfconfessed Tala fan. (Waves Pom Poms) Oh well, your story was still good anyway. -

i cant wait for the sequel! the ending was kinda abrupt at the end but still very sweet! in the next story i think you should start off with kai and rei getting ready to go to dinner with max, kenny, and tyson. and have kai and rei go as a couple! but your the author update soon!

hoshicat _

LOL Funny ending! I loved it! And I cant wait till the sequel!

I loved the fic! The whole idea was cool, kinda Ramna 1/2ish. Very uni

Ooh, nice! I like! Keep it up and have fun! Cya around pal! _*

Take care,

Izzy

... uh... short ending?

i really like this story. Congrats

love it update

thats funny that you left Kai confussed like that. this story is really good. Is Tala going to come back for revenge or to just piss kai off? i hope you up date soon.