awesome. i read vert not too long ago for a class i had and i really liked it. i never would have thought of combining it with naruto, but i think it worked rather well. i like the way this ended, with all three of them still together and strong and i really really like that you gave us a glimpse at there more intimate moments instead of just alluding to it; it made there relationship seem deeper. The ending leaves a great opportunity for a sequel;)

Amazing! I was on the edge of my seat for the entire story =O
I'm planning on buying Vurt and Pollen as soon as I can, the universe you've portrayed is crazily intriguing.

Great work, I don't usually go for threesome relationships or yaoi in the Naruto fandom but you have shown that it can be done, tastefully while keeping the characters as themselves.

The ending felt very abrupt, was that intentional? =S I'm still a bit sketchy on a few things, but I'm going to think over some stuff and probably re-read the story tomorrow.

I loved Team 7's reaction to Itachi in the appartment and when they pull out after they finish Part One, completely realistic given the circumstances.

It was such an awesome experience to read.

Thank you for sharing this =)

KDx

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I realliy love this story and this universe that it's set in..It's really cool and exicting!

I loved your story. The characters are very clear and interesting and the way explanations come slowly, in vague bits and pieces that always fit together is great. I couldn't stop reading!

Very interesting, I'm gonna have to track down this book now.

A really interesting series, especially with the dynamics of their relationships. And the merging of reality and illusion...

I rather liked it. Though, is this really how it ends? D:
I keep expecting more, a what happens next, but I suppose this incomplete ending leaves us wondering...

Still...T_T

i wanna read vurt now...
i'm a bit confused.
is it the first book in a trilogy? you mentioned something about pollen before so i'm just confused...
erm really interesting. i like your style, a lot. loved the ripple effect, love this because its got sasunarusaku together... so that's good.
very interesting.
sad that it's so underappreciated.
sad that you haven't updated in over a year.
OH i just read the beginning notes of chap 18.
so it's a series? is vurt the first book then?

Pretty awesome and as far as I know also very Original.. I Like. :)

What exactly is this world? does it have like monsters and shit in it or what?

Wow... this sort of leaves you hanging, but it's absolutely fabulous in any case! There are hardly any stories anywhere that portray a good, romantic relationship involving the whole of Team 7, I'm glad I found this one. I'm definitely going to see if I can find Vurt somewhere to read, it sounds like the kind of thing that I would absolutely love! Thanks for posting this, it was a great read ♥

this is one of the best story's i've found here i aplaud you the way you ended it was apropratebut i never would have guessed im not much of a yaoi fan but you make it seem so natural that i guess i kind of aprove of it now even if i dont agree with the pairing to each her/his own im a lowly sasukesakura fan and this is my first review so be kind if u ever stip by

This was a really cool read. Pretty addictive story, to be honest. Written very well and so creative and dramatic...

And the way you represented their characters in the outside world was unique and interesting and...

I just really liked this story. ^_^ I'm a little disappointed to see it end the way it did, though.

wow.

i must admit that i am more of a narusaku or any saku/male than a threesome, but...your fic makes me...i don't know.

the words, the sentences, the structures...everything was great. you got me imagine the scences and all, the dark, grayish, sepia colors, the vulgarity of it all and all that jazz.

love the character development...an you makd me love naruto with his two mates...well, your "threesome" was so...gah! and for a hardcore narusaku...i can accept a sasunarusaku...somehow...you didnt neglect...any...of...the...lovers.

sorry for the lame review...i just finished reading the whole fic today...in a one rush...and you got me wow...

and...now i want to read the book...sadly i can't buy it..so...whatever.

keep on writing!

That was AMAZING! You make me want to read Vurt, and I think I will.

I love the obscurity of the ending. It really gives the "the story will continue!" feeling that makes you want OMG MORE! And plus there seems to a be a little feeling of hope.

Orochimaru = awesome. Even though he spoke only about ten words.

I also loved the character relationships in this story and how they responded to the Vurt world. I liked how Sasuke and Sakura were at complete odds but slowly and hesitantly warmed up, and especially how Sasuke hoped that his Vurt counterpart would fail and die! It seems that Vurt tore the three of them apart, but in the end glued them together.

Morever, this crazy fusion is more representative of the series than most of the fics out there! I think you got the characterization right on the spot, including the consideration for the circumstances and etc.

Amazing. It's very confusing, because I've never read the books...but...whoa.