I found this rather good. It's nice reading a fic that's not rushed.

hahah, that was great! A breath of fresh air from what I usually read. You should definately continue! And maybe not be so cruel to them ( they didn't go all the way) HAHAH!
ideas? make them return from the journey and have Envy mad because they were gone so long...and maybe it would be funny if half way through their sex Gluttony comes in and asks what they're doing! haha!

I vote for a lemon! We've had limes and fluff... LEMON, PLEASE!! ^^;

EPIC LULZ!!
The whole thing made me giggle and drool!
I liked the part where he thought that Envy was a girl!
And the second chapter was epic fluffiness!
Please continue!Please!

I loved it.. Just one thing though.. Whats up with 'his-' then there is nothing else there? Ah well, i think I may be the only one who pointed that out..
But other than that it was well done!
*hands you a cookie*

OMG al was so funny

"Nii-san, you player!"
oh god i cracked up so bad

OMG i love your story!! :) please pleasse update soon!!

oh, please continue! It's a great story!

And it's going on my faves!

Plez don't stop! it's really good!! plez update soon

PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A TWO-IN-ONESHOT! This is really funny and you should continue. Please update!

I want morre

well

envy could be thinking of chibi-chan all the time and stuff

and he goes to find him on their journey

this is soo kawaii

i love it

I love envy

and Ed

and EnvyXEd

Oh you should so keep writing more! I felt so bad
r Envy at that one part! Please keep writing or your going to make me cry!^-^

Great story! I LOVE seme Edward!
Please write more!

All I can say about the ending is "aww~!" Al is so adorable. This was a pretty good fic. Kepp up the good work.

Continue Continue Continue PLEASE!