I can't wait to read the next chapter, to see what happens next.

It sounds like "planned poverty" or something. Why aren't they living on the bus? And don't they have...savings or something that they could dip into? What about Molly's career? Sorry-I know I'm being long winded and over logical, but that's what I was thinking while I was reading this story. No offense to you

it SUCKS

This stories good... but... ok my logic is taking over. If Molly is this big time singer, wouldnt she be getting royalties from the songs she's written? And I dont think they'd put all their money in just one bank... just a few things I find a little un-logical... but mostly its a good story. Keep it up!

There's more- right? there has to be more! Don't make me freak- Or I'll get eviler! he he he.

Yeah, I think the stories great. Slow down. Give details. Like what does the house look like. What were the people's feeling about leaving. Stuff lik that.

okay, I'm done babbling like an idiot now. You can continue.

That last sentanse is kinda sad. okay, onto the next chapter!

okay youre not to bright are you i mean i could have written a longer chapter about that you are dumb

good story, poorly written. They were just driving along and abandoned their bus on the side of the road? That doesn't make sense. Why wouldn't they just live in their bus? that'd be...logical.

Talk about a cliff hanger! What's going to happen? Please continue soon!

Everything happens way too fast. Just some more details.

Please write more