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| Riku-Rocks 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThe ending of this story is perfect. I especially enjoyed the final paragraph. Well done. |
| NativeMoon 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseAnother amazing story. And though I have never been one to appreciate Peter, I think I do now and its thanks to you. Just a though-provoking story - yet again another one that could be explored deeply, but that is probably best left to its singular chapter. Very well done in every respect. |
| fahzzyquill 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abusereally good. short for you but good all the same. i like that you made peter something other than heartless. most authors just make him pure evil. |
| Jo Huston 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW. All I can say. WOW. |
| unlikely2 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. |
| Kate 2006-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell written. Good job of keeping it short and meaningful. |
| chuxter 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseexcellent but i think the next chater could be better |
| Sentrosi - Gone 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat! |
| Oya 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseTouching. But wouldn't Voldy know who did that? |
| excessivelyperky 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseMarauders. Still. Always. |
| Meta Capricorn 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuselittle story oh so sad, heart-wrenching hopeful, and yet so simple. I've lost my speech, sorry. Yours, Meta |