The ending of this story is perfect.
I especially enjoyed the final paragraph.
Well done.

Another amazing story. And though I have never been one to appreciate Peter, I think I do now and its thanks to you. Just a though-provoking story - yet again another one that could be explored deeply, but that is probably best left to its singular chapter. Very well done in every respect.

really good. short for you but good all the same. i like that you made peter something other than heartless. most authors just make him pure evil.

WOW. All I can say. WOW.

Excellent.

Well written. Good job of keeping it short and meaningful.

excellent
but i think the next chater could be better

Great!

Touching. But wouldn't Voldy know who did that?

Marauders. Still. Always.

little story oh so sad, heart-wrenching hopeful, and yet so simple.
I've lost my speech, sorry.
Yours,
Meta